The Echoes Of Zhakharhazh
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Stole the moon!(negates first)
Anything i could improve on my first chapter?
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There are quite a few grammatical errors and a few spelling errors but other than that 10/10
I'd recommend getting a proof reader.
Sorry guys, ive been trying to get info into proof reading for a bit now
Ill get on with chapter 2 soon though, i just dont really get good ideas as of now...