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Listie The Scribe Maid

Listie The Scribe Maid #1 · Jan 11th, 2013 · 2 · 1 ·

(Joke) Alt. Title: Fool

PegaDashie

PegaDashie #2 · Jan 11th, 2013 · 3 · ·

That shipping

Chloronium

Chloronium #3 · Jan 13th, 2013 · · ·

Nice pic i'd say.

DashyJ

DashyJ #4 · Jan 23rd, 2013 · · ·

Very nice I like the paring .

Pegasus-skip

Pegasus-skip #5 · Aug 7th, 2013 · · ·

A good overall plot, the story was well written and thought out, however as much as it was well written I just couldn't get the 'Believability' factor of this. Why?

Yes the Wonderbolts are Rainbow Dash's dream, but she would NEVER abandon her friends like that - not for 10 years straight, that goes completely against her ingrained loyalty to her friends, on top of that if she was in love with Cheerilee as you portray, there's no way the Element of LOYALTY would abandon her.

So although a good stand alone, I feel it asn't true to the characters.

Lord Stratos Eclipse