Ditzy Doo's boss has had enough of her at work. He comes up with a plan to get her fired. Not only fired but humiliated, and broken. Then, and only then, will Ditzy be ready to be a grown up and put her nick name of Derpy Hooves behind her. At lest that what her boss thinks.
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The Golden Harvest/Carrot Top thing was a bit confusing. Are they the same pony? But this story is great! I love Ditzy Doo!
Wow I want to kill that guy I mean I would I would kill him as my OC!
Great. If she reacts like a real pony and tries to kill herself, it'll be her fault for being weak and not his for being a jackass. (And I apologize to the jackasses of Ponyville.)
Dont Pick on Derpy hes my hero
good so far. looking forward to the rest of the story. i do have to mention that the character names lke mentioned in the other comment made it slightly confusing. otherwise good job...... and i do enjoy a good story about ditzy.
I like ditzy too. good pony with a bad condition
Rain by Hollywood Undead fits pretty well here
DUN DUN DUNNNNNN!!!. on and canius ditzy is a mare :/
I agree with comander 9067 she is nice and funny but it's sad she has eyes like they are.
Derpy is the best mare ever she is nice, funny, and cute. I wish I could be Dinky so she could be my mom. And I am a GUY!
Hmmm..........I wonder who will land the first punch when his plan does what anyone with awareness
, intellect
and humility
can see it will. Hope he likes the Moon. I can think of someone who'll happily send him there. 
All the fires of hell can not express my rage!
Screw you Overnight! oh and nice chapter!
This guy needs a clue-by-four, stat. Also, the following friendship report should be written:
"Dear Princess Celestia: I learned that objectivist vermin are flammable. Signed Everypony."
Well, I noticed this.
I think you might mean "rid" and not "ride".
Evil Overnight, you will ruin yourself and Ponyville by changing Derpy! Good story, though. 
Do you know when you will have more ready? I need more
. I foresee Ponyville turning on Overnight for what he is doing to Derpy, trying to get her fired and trying to manipulate her.
thank you all for the comments and the help. yeah a I have made some errors, but thanks to yall i will be able to go back and edit them out. I'm mostly just happy someone has read the story and likes it. thank yall again for the help.
1958887 i like it too brah really! so for now i will give you
SO i wrote this in a few hours so it may not be as good as it should be, sorry for that. had a death in the fam and this got pushed back. I hope yall like this and the story is almost done now. I hope the end will be good enough for everyone.
I liked the chapter quite a lot but it seems you rushed it a little I think more could of been done with it. But, it was still good excited to read about the evaluation.
“Um I’m looking for Ditzy she’s missing and she needs help. And I may or may not be looking for something called a human also. The second can wait, for now.”
BEST
LINE
EVER!!!
lovely derp eyes
1924698i feel the same.
is this story dead?
2033386
So... Did you decide that this story wasn't worth continuing and just abandoned it? It's been two years. I'm guessing there isn't a last chapter. Sad...