Pony trek

Rainbowfluttergummy #1 · Jan 19th, 2012 · · ·

Note this is a side story (mostly a bet from a friend ) and has nothing to do with my main story Scootaloo's first time which may sond like a clopfic but it ain't just a love story (scootsXspike) anyways hope u enjoy especially iffin ur a Trekie like me

Rainbowfluttergummy

Rainbowfluttergummy #2 · Jan 19th, 2012 · · ·

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If I get enough positive feedback I'll keep writing some mor pony trek and plz dont be harsh it's my second evar......also I pretty much type this everywhere but if u hazent read my second life DO IT its amazing

#3 · Jan 19th, 2012 · · ·

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Good job a bit a spelling and grammar mistakes but good job

Fetch

Fetch #4 · Jan 19th, 2012 · · ·

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Data, please read this.
Captain, I believe my universal translator is malfunctioning. I cannot comprehend this.
Your translator is working fine Data. That text is an example of what happens when writers get careless.

Rainbowfluttergummy

Rainbowfluttergummy #5 · Jan 19th, 2012 · · ·

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Or have bad technology lulz (stupid iPod with ur messin up and stupid stupidness) thx fetch

thewaffler

thewaffler #6 · Jan 19th, 2012 · · ·

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missing an L is boldly and a few other spelling errors
A lot of capitalization errors (Proper names and places should be capitalized.)
People generally enjoy longer fics btw.
I don't take Riker seriously without the beard.
Where's Wesley and why isn't he there to be told to shut up.
I was okay, it wasn't offensive and it had a beginning, middle and end,
It was a nice first effort. 3.5/5.

wat

wat #7 · Jan 19th, 2012 · · ·

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Holy spelling mistakes batman!

Rainbowfluttergummy

Rainbowfluttergummy #8 · Jan 19th, 2012 · · ·

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Lol thx guys and yea definetly needs to be longer and needs to be typed on computer not iPod thx fer feed back obj and btw waffled spike was Wesley crusher just I called him enson spike instead of enson crusher

Andy Ray