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Heart attack becase of the new Chapter -> Done
Waiting for the next awesome chapter -> *in progress
2812420 Thank you!
Also! Nurse Fluttershy is on her way to help you with the side effects of step 2
another good chapter.
AWSOME Beside us human do need to fight to be nomel
I see a romance tag!
Oooh oooh, who's it between?
I don't need details (Don't spoil it like that XD)
Just tell me...is there Royalty involved?
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Must not give out any info......
>_>
She might be watching me....
One thing... its is possesive and it's is "it is".
At one point in your story you made a mistake and used it's as possesive. It is a normal thing to mess up but i would advise fixing that. Just a suggestion.
Just thought I would tell you about this. I may have missed other parts where this shows up but meh... that is what I caught. Anyways, I loved this story and it is a little different than the usual HiE I read. Keep up the good work!
well i feel bad for Deckard because he. is. screwed!!!!! so good luck with the wraith of Fluttershy your gonna need it.
Don't worry declared I'm sure whatever fluttershy will do couldn't be worse then being maimed by a manticor-*falls on ground dead while foaming at the mouth*
He is about to be mind raped in the EYES!!!
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How fast you reading it?
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Also, wasn't my choice. I was only the editor. I am now just starting writing the chapters myself.
I took in this story from a different writer.
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OH MY GOD YOUR A GENIUS!
If only ponies knew what bacon was.
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Deadly. Poison. When, by all reasonable estimates, you should already be dead, lethal forms of self-defence cease to be unreasonable.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-GxnM-0onvs&t=33
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I was attempting to reinforce your point, not diminish it. Since you didn't mention the deadly poison, it seemed wise to bring it up.
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So you caught that reference huh?
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You know. Maybe that poison was not meant to kill him???
You'll see
2817044 No it's alright, I'll change it in a few mins, thanks.
Playing my trumpet (terribly) and reading sounds fun right?
Quite good. What does Celestia need room for, though? HMMM>.>
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He killed a mother who was only trying to protect her child. Because he was frustrated.
If this guy is supposed to be the hero, I'd really like to see what the villain is like.
Also, that and the outburst he had when they were examining his guns pretty much proves that he's a walking timebomb, and Celestia's reaction is to offer him a position as a peacekeeper instead of lock him up or at least keep an eye on him? WTF?!
3649867 he killed a dangerous wild animal with his bare hands and he could get 15 years dungeon for that? Tia is clearly out of her mind.