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Ohkay! As a start, I'm gonna say you actually sold something with that premise. I'm used to passing over the Human tags thinking "Yep, gonna be dumb story" and skippin' along, but you've done a legit sell here with that description.
I'm sure it's all gonna fall apart on me and I will let you know once it gets to that point.
1842050 I'm trying to tell if that was a complement or the opposite...
1842050 In case it was a complement... thanks... if it wasn't.... don't worry... I'm pretty good at writing HiE fics... I already have two others and one of them are over 40 chapters.
mutha fucking moars!
1842072 I just feel bad when I drop reading of something and don't give any feedback on it when I do. So I'm going to be doing that should I do.
1842083 hm... I see. If you want a read then you should check out my other two stories. My first was my legit first story so it's meh. The sequel is currently at 41 chapters and every time I release a new chapter I get nothing but positive feedback... especially for the comedy portion. Another good thing. I'm not one of those HiE authors that put the human in Equestria and go by this...
"HEY! Hey... SEE THIS HUMAN HERE!? ya.. FIGHT HIM AND YOU LOSE.... ALWAAAAAAAYS!"
In other words he isn't perfect.... like they should be.
wait i get it
hes the alicorn of DIMENSION,.
'em i right?
1842173 Eea..... no....
Tease Celestia? Really, the woman save your live at least not an hour ago and you will tease her?…Oh well I suppose that is Decker, and who know, maybe that way they will warmed up, when he and Luna start dating (In the original and this story, I see clues, so is not so far away)
P.S: Now that you have the idea clear, did you still will put the whole situation with the manticore?
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NNNNOOOOoooooooooo
1842196 You'll just have to see... atm though I am working on my chapter for a shadow's grave
it is kinda weird how a human from a different dimension turns out to be the father of the two most powerful alicorns in equestria. Their better be a good explanation for this, and I mean a GOOD one.
Otherwise great chapter
1842273 you know... that's exactly what I thought after reading it... I thought long and hard about what the hell could have happened... but once it got explained to me from the original author Via PM I finally understood
1842285
I hope it makes some sense in the end.
probably went to explore the universe and changed forms apparently IMO.
My mind is full of "WHAT THE FUCK IS GOING ON!?"
Still loving the story though!
My Mind Is Chaos Right Now My Emotions In order:
umm simon??? is that you?
You keep using the wrong your/you're's, die in a fire.
I bet if one of them have a video game consle or game boy, the CMC will shut up and have fun and rartiy will be like ty ty ty ty so mech.
1843606 hahahaha
1844365 So will you, i want to see how funny you can make it?
1844585 oh... doing so is so damn funny while SO damn evil at the same time XD
1844585 let me tell you. It WILl be hard to do so. But not for my other HiE seeing how Discord is now involved
1844590 oh hem that carzy guy, he will sure to stop being evil playing some japen video game's that is know to mind fucked people in a fun way lol,
1844964 ya... just so you know though whenever I put the text 'like this' representing his thoughts,I rarely put punctuation unless it is important. Just pointing that out
And random human dad of ponies... Well, something magic is going on or lots of drugs.
Alright this story just went to whatthefucksville
Wake me up when its over ok?
I have no idea but somehow I can associate this 'Dad' of Cele and Luna with this story:
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/36567/my-little-princesses
So since I read that story before this here, I kinda had a dejavu
"Fine...eat me." "OKAY!!!"
Ugh, this story is beyond bizarre, the grammar needs work, and this chapter just kinda NOPE'd me. Sorry, I can't read this anymore.
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In hindsight, the hero surviving a stab to the heart should have been a red flag.
No offence but this story has left my mind in total chaos