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The Fire of Rainbows

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Romantic story i made between Princess Luna and the animal caretaker FlutterShy. Please enjoy and leave constructive comments. This story may not be at all what it seems like....
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Complete Published: Nov 26th, 2012 Download
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Thorlol
Thorlol #1 · Nov 26th, 2012 · · ·
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animal caretaker FlutterShy

*Fluttershy.

Fanon Canon
Fanon Canon #2 · Nov 26th, 2012 · · ·
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WHY IS EVERYPONY SCREAMING!
Seriously

Regidar
Regidar #3 · Nov 26th, 2012 · · ·
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Upvoted because for once not Twiluna.

Fiddy
Fiddy #4 · Nov 26th, 2012 · · ·
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3 views 5 dislikes?


Really people...

Brony of the Revolution
Brony of the Revolution #5 · Nov 27th, 2012 · · ·
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So it was a dream and Fluttershy wasn't with Luna?
whitsblog.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/01/okay-meme-face.jpg
Still, good story!
I guess...

Yasturo
Yasturo #7 · Nov 28th, 2012 · · 1 ·
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FlutterShy suddenly made a high pitched squealing sound, which to most sounded like fear.

"EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEK" and Luna was startled and angry because this happend daily.

"WHO DO YOU THINK YOU ARE CHILD? STOP SCREAMING! I AM YOUR PRINCESS!" she then looked meekly at the ground, she didn't like speaking in Canterlock. Then FlutterShy saw Luna's self help books she had picked up. She realized that instead of being terrified of her princess, maybe she could help her, to stop other ponies like her from being scared of the dark mare. I mean she was only trapped inside the moon for 1000 years right?

"Im....so sorry... forgive me princess.... please forgive me..." She became really quiet, and just mumbled something about helping her.

"What was that? You are willing to help ME? THE MOST FEARED PRINCESS OF ALL? WHY WOULD THY DO SUCH A THING?"

"I...I just wanna be able to help anypony that asks.." she stated meekly. "I can help with keeping your voice at a low volume, Ive practiced a lot as you can tell."

"Fine child....im sorry as well, it was tradition back in the old days to speak in Canterlock... I will gladly accpet your help." The ponies then rejoiced with an awkward hug and agreed on a meeting time in the near future, which would be a very HARD process of getting Luna to speak normalluy, after 1000 years right?

3 WEEKS LATER

"Ok, so today we are going to start with your tone." FlutterShy stated. They had now been meeting for several weeks now, slowly getting to know each others strengths and weaknesses so as not to hurt one another accidentely. They worked on what FlutterShy considered to be a lot, and they continued to work on it weekly, but in secret, to not make any pony suspicous of their lessons. "What do you think is the problem with your tone?"

"I....." then she burst into tears and started cyring on FlutterShy's shoulder. This hasn't happened at all during their last couple of sessions. Luna began complaining about her sister and her banishment to the moon, which was one of the hugest problems with Luna, one of the main causes of her "disability to interact with other ponies" as the doctors put it. FlutterShy had begun to comfort her, and this normally wasn't her job, normally she was the one that needed comforting from her best friend, Rainbow Dash. This was mainly new to her.

"Its alright, Im here to help with your problems, not make them worse. Please don't cry." Then Luna leaned up, and slowly kissed FlutterShy right on the lips. This completely blew FlutterShy's mind, because just recently before she got together with Luna, she was thinking that she might start trying mares next, because she had been turned down and heartbroken by way too many guys before. Instead of slowly rejecting this new found love, she embraced it as he closed her eyes to enjoy the entire kiss which seemed to last an eternity. Then they heard hoof steps coming to the door and quickly both sat up at the same time but not before Pinkie Pie came in and saw them.

"oH MY GOD.." Pinkie Pie said as she slowly entered the room. Both Luna and FlutterShy had huge looks of embarrassment on their faces, and they felt really weird.

"Look, Pinkie Pie..." FlutterShy started but she didnt get to finsih before Pinkie started bouncing around the room filled with joy!

"YIPPPPPPPPPIE! Now i feel so excited! Aren't you guys really excited? Cuz im really excited. This calls for a party! We need to have a party so you guys and me and Dashie can tell everyone!"

"What do you mean you and Dashie?"

"Oh, thats right you don't know yet! ME AND DASHIE HAVE BEEN DATING!" And that's when FlutterShy awoke from her dream.

Sorry this is to long.. BUT TO MUCH YELLING :flutterrage: WHYYYYYYY!!!!!!

To much yelling, Nope :facehoof:

The Fire of Rainbows
The Fire of Rainbows #8 · Dec 3rd, 2012 · · ·
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There was a lot of yelling bc it was a dream/nightmare for Fluttershy* (Yes i know how to spell it, but seriously, who cares how its spelled? i used an extra capital! Thats it!) and the reason there was a lot of yelling was bc its a nightmare for Fluttershy and she is a very quiet pony. why dislike a good story just bc of the name FlutterShy*?
:applecry:

The Fire of Rainbows
The Fire of Rainbows #9 · Dec 4th, 2012 · · ·
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and there are only a few lines where there is screaming.
:derpyderp1:

Pe4ceKeep3r
Pe4ceKeep3r #10 · Dec 5th, 2012 · · ·
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why cant they be together? why?:fluttercry::applecry::raritycry:

The Fire of Rainbows
The Fire of Rainbows #11 · Dec 7th, 2012 · · ·
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Bc it was supposed to be a different type of story

TEK101
TEK101 #13 · Jan 5th, 2013 · · ·
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It was okay. It was not one of the best stories I have read, but wasn't terrible. I also noticed this, and I thought I would mention it because it stood out the most.

The ponies then rejoiced with an awkward hug and agreed on a meeting time in the near future, which would be a very HARD process of getting Luna to speak normalluy, after 1000 years right?

now, I know that "normally" doesn't have a "U" in it, and only mention it because I know this to be fact. It did not affect the story in a big way, and other than annoying me a little for this mistake, it is a good story.:pinkiesmile: I don't mean to sound mean, and I am just trying to help.:twilightsheepish:

The Fire of Rainbows
The Fire of Rainbows #14 · Mar 19th, 2013 · · ·
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1909289 ha ha I know there is a lot of bad grammer in this story. I'm really better on paper than on a computer, considering I don't have one and I have to go the library. I was typing and editing the story at the same time, never a good combo! XD Thanks for the like.

TEK101
TEK101 #15 · Mar 19th, 2013 · · ·
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2289239 Your welcome.:pinkiesmile:

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