Whee! Funny chapter.
Comedy tag?

Little scared going into this fic, but Im feeling less brain bleach will be needed in this ShiningSparkle fic than was needed in the last one I read.
In THAT one Cadence got the incest ball rolling! She started it by getting herself dyed to look like Twi and then...

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Hey, to each their own, but that was one of the less squicky ones I've seen.

...I'm going to read this.

But only because its you and I haven't read anything by you that I didn't enjoy.

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Sweet sock-wearing Celestia I read that one too. Want to borrow some of my leftover brain bleach?

Great start by the way. Looking forward to the rest of it. Just have to get some sleep first... stupid limitations getting between me and my ponies.

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Would you mind sharing with me the name of the story? Or is it really that bad?

Nothing's worse for relationships than Spike.

Few things are as poisonous to a relationship as that green-eyed monster.

whee, AP lit is useful

1681488 I am now interested. Name of fic?

1685198 That sounds like Vindicated Depravity, if I'm not mistaken.

Twi's pretty happy when she's drunk to no end

Is it weird that I read "Hey, you never know..." like Mr. New Vegas?

1685858 http://www.fimfiction.net/story/36749/Vindicated-Depravity

the sex scenes are probably the hottest thing i have read on this site. you WILL clop.

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http://www.fimfiction.net/story/36749/Vindicated-Depravity

the sex scenes are probably the hottest thing i have read on this site. you WILL clop.

1684870 I want to read it! What's the Name?

I find it rather humorous that most of the comments are about a DIFFERENT incest fic featuring Shining and Twilight.

"...the two less-drunken mares manoeuvred..."
The only really glaring mistake, although there are others.

I like Dash's interpretation of Loyalty, I would like to see her help bury a body. Interesting starting point, promising, and very funny. 9/10 will continue reading. It helps that you only included the good half of the Mane 6.

I'm curious if the person that uses this computer after me will track my history. The look on their face when they see pony clop. Priceless! Okay, here we go. Epically long review, incoming.

The one in the middle was giggling fiercely. The ones on either side of her, only slightly less so.
This is only a slight gripe I have, mostly because nothing in the show hints at drunken antics or alcohol at all. It's not necessarily clear how an inebriated Twilight would act, especially since trying alcohol would likely be her first time doing so. I'd imagine her to be a rambling drunk, not a happy one, but that I can let slide.

The point I wish to bring up, however, is that we don't see much of Twilight. Yes, she's the central character, and yes, her personality's undoubtedly changed due to intoxication, but we don't see any of her usual tawdry quirks of personality traits. I'm an emotionless robot in real life and a happy drunk when inebriated. Yes, a personality changes when drunk, but a few scraps still leak through. Where is her OCD behavior? Loquaciousness? Worry for Spike? Panic at the possibility of her secret coming out? This is Twilight, but it doesn't feel Twilight.

...took a moment to realign herself against Twilight’s frame.
It's rather unclear what Rarity's doing. Realign how? Is she holding her up? Snuggling Twilight? Just walking next to her?

Now, front right hoof up... that’s it, now front left... good, front right again, and your back left
Why is she moving her front right twice before her back right? Twilight sound absolutely hammered, so stretching limbs seems a tad too much for her. Unless Rarity's deliberately trying to get her to faceplant.

Twilight looked up dreamily at Rainbow. “I love you Dashie...” she said, making the cyan pony shift her eyes uncomfortably.

Then she devolved once again into giggles. “But sorry. Not telling.”
I love this little bit here. Despite the massive amounts of alcohol and likely kept promises if she told her friends, she refuses to tell her friends what really occurred between her and her brother. It's a small bit, but it reflect the importance of their relationship and her devotion to her brother, sexual or otherwise. Clouded as her mind may be, she is doing everything possible to protect her dirty little secret. It's a small touch, but wonderful to have.

Now excuse me, I should have been studying for my Accounting final in 2 minutes instead of reading your story and writing this. Next chapter review will be coming up later.

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for me. the squikier the better!

what i'm going to listen to while reading this

[youtube=6m2THtTuBIo]

Journeyman sent me here, and damn him for getting me attached to another story.
At least this one is finished already, though.
Awkward humor and sex is nice, too.

3244086 Ah, Journeyman finally does something useful.

Hope you enjoyed this sordid little tale.

loving it so far, provides some good backround before the story gets rollin, not that it needed much, but its nice to see :D

Awesome start to this! 8'D
Heeheehee... I'm already into it 8D

2984574 That video is a lie! It says two hours... when it is actually 1:59:57...

Its not proper!

this is quite well written. I'm intrigued.

I also like characterization, so far.

“Come on! Was it somepony famous? One of the Wonderbolts? Or that Hoity Toity guy? Was it... Princess Celestia magically transformed into a stallion? ”

Best line I've ever read, hands down.