Next chapter, "Questions", is up. That's it for today, boys and girls. Much thanks to everyone who commented/liked/faved this story. I never expected it would get this many views, and I am now more convinced than ever that the "feature" algorithm on this site works something like this.
1683875 Hopefully the chapter "Questions" answers some of yours. (Ha, ha, get it?) Sorry, but the story is written, so I can't really take suggestions. Feel free to criticise it if you don't like it, but I won't be changing the plot now. I'm only working on some "glue" to make the whole thing coherent. It's a bad habit, but I write parts of my stories horribly out-of-order and then weld them together.
1683768 ... Both? Are you STARK RAVING MAD man?? Actually, I think you answered a different question, I asked what is it with this site tthat turns your mind to give off darker tones...
1684115 Yessss, the aroma of threesome is in the air. What does 'threesome' smell like? you ask. Musk, lust, sweat, a hint of humiliation and Win...SO MUCH WIN!!!!
I feel so . . . dirty . . . *slaps himself* Okay! This was another great chapter! Keep doing what you're doing, Kevin Bacon! *slaps himself again* I think I'll go take a hot shower . . .
I'm enjoying this story so far quite a lot. Can't wait for the next installment you have planned likely sometime tomorrow morning/early afternoon by my guess? (Mind you university/college is a possibility, so more likely late afternoon if my guess is close.) Looking forward to it
1683992 You're welcome. I keep thinking people are going to be disappointed by the ending. At this point I just don't know. 1684003 SOON. 1684058 Yes, it is! 1684095 I tried my best to keep Twi and Shine as brother and sister despite the sex. I really hope I pulled it off. 16841151684339 My answer: 1684270 1684287 Ummm... you made two comments and I replied to them both... my answers should make sense. 1684302 This is completely random, but I never really understood what "musk" smell is. I have no doubt that I have smelled it, I just never smelled something and had someone tell me that was "musky" and went "Aha, so that's what musky is."........ It's late, I should really be going to bed. 16843331684362 Glad you're liking it! More is coming, please be patient. 1684379 What. 1684426 This may be the most disturbing fact about myself that I ever reveal on this site, but... I actually have a job.
1684642 you hit sibling relationships right in the head, I would know, I have 4 older brothers. No matter what, they will always love you and be there for you. No matter how much you fuck up. You also did the sex well to, it doesn't read like sex just for the sake of sex.
After a very brief chat with Cadance – who, as it turned out, had come home early and simply succumbed to curiosity – Shining had returned to the bedroom and asked Twilight if she wished to continue their “activities”.
Show, don't tell. This sentence is the most frustrating passage in the chapter. Show us about the awkward moments, the stuttered words, and the half-thought excuses after being caught. Just telling in passing about an incredibly meaningful, rushed conversation is utterly unsatisfying.
1684870 Im getting the feeling that "Vindicated Depravity" is the baseline for all ShiningSparkle fics to start from. *checks closet* Its cool, I bought 10 more jugs after that incident, currently have 4 left. (Which reminds me, I need to go to the grocery store) We can share my supply when it comes to the time that Softy promises.
1681183 I do not know what to feel like when something like this happens. A story I made on the side here got more attention than the ones I actually planned out...
How does this happen
I like that this happens sometimes though, but it is really odd.
Added to read later list. Can't wait for this to become completed so I can read it. (I only read completed fics, because I tend to read a whole story in a sitting, unless it is HUGE, then I split it in a few consecutive sittings. But I cannot interrupt a story, read another story, and come back to the same story again, because then I have to read the whole thing again to get back into it.)
1683889 The algorithm is actually X views in Y timeframe.
This story keeps getting better and better. Almost all of the wincest fics are pure clop and/or angst so it's quite the pleasure to have something about their feelings and thoughts.
Next chapter, "Questions", is up. That's it for today, boys and girls.
Much thanks to everyone who commented/liked/faved this story. I never expected it would get this many views, and I am now more convinced than ever that the "feature" algorithm on this site works something like this.
1683875 Hopefully the chapter "Questions" answers some of yours. (Ha, ha, get it?)
Sorry, but the story is written, so I can't really take suggestions. Feel free to criticise it if you don't like it, but I won't be changing the plot now. I'm only working on some "glue" to make the whole thing coherent. It's a bad habit, but I write parts of my stories horribly out-of-order and then weld them together.
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HAPPY MODE ACTIVATED
Thanks for the good chapter
MOAR!
1681764 I don't enjoy clop as much as I do a good romance story, but that doesn't mean I won't upvote something, regardless of if I read it or not.
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Incest is wincest.
Daaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwww. I love sibling relationships......... Not talking about the sexual kind, just siblings in general.
I smell a three-way.
1683889 Please, just one more chapter?
More awesome than the last chapter this is for you. ->
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1683768 ... Both? Are you STARK RAVING MAD man?? Actually, I think you answered a different question, I asked what is it with this site tthat turns your mind to give off darker tones...
1684115
Yessss, the aroma of threesome is in the air.
What does 'threesome' smell like? you ask.
Musk, lust, sweat, a hint of humiliation and Win...SO MUCH WIN!!!!
Excellent story, and superbly hot clop to boot, what with everyone's little kinks going strong. I definitely look forward to more.
Do want three-way. I never see any Twi and Cadence action. There's more Shining/Twi than that.
This story is great!
I find this oddly romantic, despite the strange relationship. It's not so porny that the feelings get lost.
I feel so . . . dirty . . .
*slaps himself*
Okay! This was another great chapter! Keep doing what you're doing, Kevin Bacon!
*slaps himself again*
I think I'll go take a hot shower . . .
I'm enjoying this story so far quite a lot. Can't wait for the next installment you have planned likely sometime tomorrow morning/early afternoon by my guess? (Mind you university/college is a possibility, so more likely late afternoon if my guess is close.) Looking forward to it
this is funny
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doesn't matter. Gonna have sex
1683992 You're welcome. I keep thinking people are going to be disappointed by the ending. At this point I just don't know.
1684003 SOON.
1684058 Yes, it is!
1684095 I tried my best to keep Twi and Shine as brother and sister despite the sex. I really hope I pulled it off.
1684115 1684339 My answer: 1684270
1684287 Ummm... you made two comments and I replied to them both... my answers should make sense.
1684302 This is completely random, but I never really understood what "musk" smell is. I have no doubt that I have smelled it, I just never smelled something and had someone tell me that was "musky" and went "Aha, so that's what musky is."........ It's late, I should really be going to bed.
1684333 1684362 Glad you're liking it! More is coming, please be patient.
1684379 What.
1684426 This may be the most disturbing fact about myself that I ever reveal on this site, but... I actually have a job.
1684642 MOAR!
1684642 (*blink*) ..I did? Maybe I'm the one who's stark raving mad then... oh well.
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Whenever I go back to TvTropes, I go to that trope immediately and remember what happened last time I got stuck, just so that I can save myself.
INCEST?
I THINK YOU MEAN WINCEST
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1684642 you hit sibling relationships right in the head, I would know, I have 4 older brothers. No matter what, they will always love you and be there for you. No matter how much you fuck up. You also did the sex well to, it doesn't read like sex just for the sake of sex.
After a very brief chat with Cadance – who, as it turned out, had come home early and simply succumbed to curiosity – Shining had returned to the bedroom and asked Twilight if she wished to continue their “activities”.
Show, don't tell. This sentence is the most frustrating passage in the chapter. Show us about the awkward moments, the stuttered words, and the half-thought excuses after being caught. Just telling in passing about an incredibly meaningful, rushed conversation is utterly unsatisfying.
1684870
Im getting the feeling that "Vindicated Depravity" is the baseline for all ShiningSparkle fics to start from.
*checks closet*
Its cool, I bought 10 more jugs after that incident, currently have 4 left. (Which reminds me, I need to go to the grocery store)
We can share my supply when it comes to the time that Softy promises.
1684642 Well whenever works for you to post is fine by me. This is a god story that deserves the wait. Quality FTW
1681183 I do not know what to feel like when something like this happens. A story I made on the side here got more attention than the ones I actually planned out...
How does this happen
I like that this happens sometimes though, but it is really odd.
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Its "Vindicated Depravity". I couldn't remember the name of it at the time of that post
That story is a crazy ride
Have fun!
I very much like this story. Please continue, it's actually quite beautiful. ^-^
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Probably not the only one - I'm sure people were thining of it the moment the BBFF song came up
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Twilight is now the new Revolver Ocelot
(Skip to 3:05 and end at 3:13)
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I DID think that the end of the BBBFF song sounded kinda like a romance song towards the end the first time I heard it.
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It is. You are correct.
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Vindicated Depravity
(Im really spreading that fic around today aren't I?)
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Sure, they are stepsiblings that have halfsiblings in common (my aunts are my aunts on both my father's as well as my mother's side).
This...chapter taught me that Semen is affected by foods :|
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WHERE ARE YOU NOT!?!
So...threesome?
sums them all up quite nicely I think
This is awesome. Just the right mix of sweet and sour.
Also, 'something tasty'? I'd guess oysters, but that probably doesn't work here. A pineapple dish, certainly :p
I like this story a lot.
Added to read later list. Can't wait for this to become completed so I can read it. (I only read completed fics, because I tend to read a whole story in a sitting, unless it is HUGE, then I split it in a few consecutive sittings. But I cannot interrupt a story, read another story, and come back to the same story again, because then I have to read the whole thing again to get back into it.)
I don't usually read incest. But when I do, I
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I find this interesting. Keep up the good work!
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The algorithm is actually X views in Y timeframe.
This story keeps getting better and better. Almost all of the wincest fics are pure clop and/or angst so it's quite the pleasure to have something about their feelings and thoughts.
Getting several dislikes just because it is a clop fic
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