Okay, have another chapter. No sex in this one. "Confessions" was actually written first, months ago. I think my writing style was bit different then... I dunno.

God... As much as I usually want clop, I like the story for this... GOOOOD JOB

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Of course it turns Cadance on.

1680729YOU ARE A FILLY!!!!!! YOU SHOULDN'T BE READNG THIS STUFF!!!!

It's sad people downrated this just because of the subject. Probably never even bothered to read it.

How do I know? This is written way too well to be downvoted for anything else. It's entertaining, unique, pulls various small but believable twists and turns, everypony feels real when I read them (that's something that you just don't see often), and the lovey emotional parts are all beautiful but avoid being overly sappy. Hell, even the clop did not feel gratuitously stuffed in.

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have fun!

FFS....

Congrats on the Featured box, but now I'll never watch A Canterlot Wedding the same way... .

1680903 1681212 1681301 Thanks! I aim to please. I'm just usually a very poor shot. I still can't believe that this is the story that got featured.
1681210 I love surprising my readers... too much. It's actually a problem and I need to cut back.
1681265 Totally expected. Also, some people might be genuinely turned off by my writing style. I'm never sure about how well I'm getting my ideas across.
1681313 Well, she is the Princess of Love. Love turns her on, no matter who it involves.
1681488. You mean Vindicated Depravity? I loved that one.

1681504 Thanks for the compliments! But you don't like overly sappy stuff, huh? Fair warning: you might be in for a disappointment when the remaining chapters are up...
1681537 Thanks. BTW, in case it's not clear to anyone, this story is meant to take place shortly after "A Canterlot Wedding". There used to be more stuff in the prologue that explained Twilight's reason for going to visit her brother, but I cut it because it was unmitigated crap.

I sense an incoming threesome.

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Honestly that sounds more like a Prrincess of Lust.

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There's a trope for anything and everything. I'm gonna say that right here.

What is it with me and my wincest fetish?

Lolbloodpurityisavalidexcuse.

What. The. Buck this is a strange story but somehow I'm ok with it

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1680770 Kurt is back. Tell a friend...

Love it!!!!!!!!!!!

This is one freaky family. But the writing and the emotions riding this story is wonderfully crafted. FAV'd!

...Go on...

I like this chapter even more than the others.

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Exactly that story. Judging by this chapter, you lifted a page from it.
The page where Cadence is turned on by it.

Not gonna lie... I like this fic...but I feel bad for likeing it
Its taking a.... calmer, less outrageous approach to it than Vindicated Depravity.

A-HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAAA
too bad that'll never happen in real life.

Edit: Is this seriously your headcanon?

Urm... Yea, when I first commented I was a little over enthusiastic and didn't even compliment you properly.
Clop isn't usually something I read but the stuff I have is very good stuff. That makes me feel strange because I'm 17 and I really didn't expect to enjoy this stuff so much.
But thank you for writing this story. I started off my love of romance stuff (Nothing above teen) with a cracking story and I've kicked off my love of mature rated stuff with another great story.
Well done. You do indeed deserve the thumbs up.

1681591 Really? I mean, really? What kind of a hack do you take me for? Seriously, poor Twilight in a threesome with her own brother and her sister-in-law? That comment is so ridiculous that I won't even dignify it by answering.
1681612 Tom-ay-to, Tom-ah-to.
1681634 Incest is hot. Just sweep the Westermarck Effect under the rug and let the Genetic Sexual Attraction do the job.
1681764 This. Just this.
1681888 A "calmer, less outrageous approach"? Uhh, yeah, about that... you know what, never mind. You'll find out when I get the rest of the story up. You're still stocked up on brain-bleach, right?
1681901 You, um, do realise that the show itself is not "real life", right? It's not like I expect to see an episode with Shining and Twi fucking. And "headcanon" doesn't really apply. This is more of a "what if" that doesn't blatantly go against show canon, and therefore doesn't deserve an AU tag.
1681651 1681722 1681763 1681840 1681899 1681933 Thank you! It's always great to see people enjoy something I wrote.

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At least it's not your head canon. If it was, that's messed up.
Also, I was actually meaning Real Life.

I don't really plan on reading this, but

romantic claptrap

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OH LAWDY.
I certainly did NOT expect her to be that... cool. Though now, I don't think I'll ever be able to look at any of these three just the same way again.
But still, this was definitely a very good story!

I blame my fondness for incest on my parents' pseudo-incestual relationship. Yup, that seems reasonable and totally doesn't make me look even creepier than I already am.

Pretty good,loved the conflict Shining's going through,and the ACTUAL love they show for each other. I don't care if a person has incest or fetishes,as long as its in private and consensual, in cool with it.Keep it up

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Good gravy that's brilliant.

1681933 No wonder you're such a romantic when your older.

loved the story and thank you for revealing unto me vindicated depravity unto me again. I hope to see great things come from you. O and this cadence is awesome hopefully it turns into a threesome.

cheers

I'm impressed. This isn't creepy, it isn't gratuitous, and there's actual character and relationship development. I'm looking forward to seeing where you take this.

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Oh hey a response! Lets see what he has to say.
*read*

A "calmer, less outrageous approach"? Uhh, yeah, about that... you know what, never mind. You'll find out when I get the rest of the story up. You're still stocked up on brain-bleach, right?

....
Oh GOD!!
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I think.... I think I'll ride the crazy incest train for now...
Im scared!!

Im ALWAYS stocked up!
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(As scared as I am, I was LOL-ing when I read your post and while writing this post)

1682290 no problem my friend. Its always good to see someone who can take a strange concept such as the one in the story and not make it a one-shot. Stories like that, except the ones that are well written, seem like something that was just thrown together. I give you a like

My body will rot, my soul will burn, and my mind will lay content; knowing I had indeed "READ IT ALL".
(Past Tense)

well done. you receive a and a fav.

1680781 Wait. You're telling me there is actually shipping stories with the Princess in them?
Believe me, I've tried looking for them through very exhausting searches.

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I bet you were exhausted when you were done.

1682863 Here you go.

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"Vindicated Depravity" was one of the less squicky ones you've read?
...
The hell are you reading (wo)man?

(Links?)

1682361 1682384 1682458 I always thought that the Princess of Love would have a very open-minded, but respectful approach to sexuality. As in, it's okay to have freaky fun, as long as everypony is cool with it.
1682369 ... would you care to elaborate?
1682630 Glad you're enjoying this. I agree there's lots of problems with it, but I'm honestly sick of fighting this story so I doubt I'll be fixing many of them. The whole experience in getting this fic to work was like being in a boxing match. Right now I'm just trying to fill in a hole in the story that I just can't seem to get to work. Once it's done I'll have the rest up.
1682655 Just what I was going for...
1682457 1682600 1682797 1682818 Thanks very much! I hope the later chapters live up to the expectations everyone has! (SPOILERS: They won't. )

1682875
I had the new gallon of brain bleach ready to go because I saw this was featured.... and I'm surprised at how much I like this.
I mean, there is clop for the sake of clop... and of course crap like that always seems to get featured.
But this actually has a decent backstory, which makes the clop actually have some merit to it. Please, continue with this, have mustache.

Next up, threesome. It seems like the logical next step ... but, considering just how both of the individual relationships work on their own, I very much doubt one is going to happen. Go ahead, surprise me. You WILL fail horribly.

Also, I demand more IMMEDIATELY!!! I DON'T CARE IF YOU'VE ONLY GOT ONE CHAPTER TO FINISH EDITING! I WANT SOMETHING MORE TO READ NOW!!!

Carry on.

1682875 ... Correction.... I've already read every story that has this shipping out there....
All I can say is that it is rare... So much so that I have tried to ship these two myself....

It didn't go well.....

At all.......

It was horrible......

Calling it atrocious would be saying it nicely....

Brilliant characters, excellent story.

You are awesome, and holy shit, this has turned me on greatly. You just don't even know.

This story could be the "sort-of-sequel" to dis shit ova here. You should message the author and tell him about this, then add links in the descriptions or something like that.

Any chance of a flashback to Twi and Shining's first encounter? Some clop authors draw the line at foalcon.

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I actually checked to see if Softy was the author of that story, maybe this was the sequel.

1683308 1683363 I don't know whether I should be happy or terrified that someone has figured it out. I didn't want to ask Flutterwhy until I saw the reaction the story got. Now I just gotta work up the nerve. To clarify, though, this isn't a sequel, it's an "inspired by" type of deal. For one thing, I don't do "horngasms".
1683152 You should be thankful I'm not releasing one chapter a week/month like most other fics do. Do you know how much crap I have in my Read Later list that has been sitting there since the Cretaceous period only because the authors won't update?
1683097 1683233 1683298 Thank you!

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In fact I am thankful. It's not often I enter Canterlock mode. Usually it pertains to fics I really want to know wtf happens next.
A week or two ago my own Read Later list was at least 100. I'm plenty sure I've knocked off at least 50 fics since then, but since I'm always adding to the list as well, it currently stands at 72.

My apologies for sounding rude though. It was more along the lines of 'holy crap this is addicting! I don't care how much, I only want more' rather than 'hurry up and write more you foal!' (The former being my intent and the latter being just plain rude.)

Anyway. Post more when you so desire. Just know I really want to read wtf happens next. Seriously, I eat stories. FEED ME! Please?

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I don't do "horngasms".

Aww but unusual ways of bringing about orgasm is half the fun of magical ponies.