Ten thousand years after the alicorn named Shade Heart cast the Ruby of Balance into the volcano at the edge of the Everfree Forest, one pony travels to the volcano to attempt to rescue the Ruby, and basnish evil and darkness from Eqeustria forver. But as he approaches, he notices six other ponies also at the edge of the volcano. He watches in awe as one light blue pegasus takes a leap of confidence and plunges into the heart of the volcanoin an attmpet to retrieve the Ruby. Will she succed? And if she does, will Equestria truly be free of the evil and darkness forever? Or will everything just turn out to be an illusion, where Rainbow Dash fails and Equestria falls into eternal hate......
Chapters (4)
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I didnt even realize that it was marked as crossover. So thanks for inadvertently letting me know, the mistake has been corrected. The tag is now sad, what it should have been to start Sorry for any confusion :-) /) for awesomeness
Are you going to finish this! It's cool! And you said the tag was sad, so does Rainbow die? Oh, that's my favorite pony!
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I most certainly am going to finish this
and you'll have to wait for the next chapter to find out! :-)
Ooooh... Very nice! Following. Following NOW. More please!
Chapter 2 ladies and gentlecolts!
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/65229/2
An interesting second chapter... I like the way you flashed back to Shade Heart in the middle of the story... Interesting mix of first and third person. Can't wait to see where this goes.
im back from "sick leave"
;-) anyway im writing chapter 3 now and im actually looking for an editor. check my blog post more more info or just message me directly.
and remember, stay awesomely awesome!
Very intriguing... Every chapter gets me more and more into the story, along with providing more and more questions... In short... Very excellent.
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It's official! The diary is Celestia, and since it was destroyed, so is she!
1793542 The diary was destroyed, except for the back cover. The story is being told from a first person point of view. The pony speaking in the first person is actually recalling memories from a long time ago, and telling them as a story. The third person are flashbacks that are completely seperate from the first person narratives. The two seperate storylines work to parallel each other.
Hope this clears up any confusion.