No you creeps trying to stalk me??? BUT, i do like to write short books :) I have one that is 30 typed pages :D I wrote it in 6th grade :)
This is a twist on the widely spread rumor that Prince Blueblood was actually the Changling King, Metamorphosis, in disguise. Rarity's plans to have the best night ever go horribly wrong...
Rated teen for brief kissing and language. Enjoy!
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ANYONE WHOS READING THIS YET I KNOW ITS NOT CLOSE TO BEING DONE....
Well, you have good grammar for an eighth grader.
The main problem is that you leave a lot of unanswered questions. Changelings don't feel emotions? Why did the zebra hate Metamorphisis? Why did he run from her at first? You lack a lot of that kind of detail.
Secondly, things move way too fast. It may have been Rarity's dream, but it really takes time to develop a love relationship, in reality and writing, and you wrote in less than a stephanie meyer chapter, that was supposed to have happened over hours at least.
Keep working, it was an interesting concept. Not sure I'm a fan of 'perfect at first' Blueblood, though.
If you went back over this and developed the concept this story would be epic.
T for brief kissing? Odd, yeah I know there violence and blood, I'm just putting that aside
1590408 yea i kinda made the rating BEFORE i wrote it.....
How the heck did Metamorphosis get out of the dungeon cell?
Good story! I've got to say I would love to see it be longer, but who cares! Great first story. Good concept... Just not enough words for the concept to be fully taken in. I approve!
I think I want to write a Fluttershy story next....
I'll try to go slower this time 
I'm writing a Fluttershy story now
Any criticism WILL be put into consideration. 
And I'm either almost done/done (Not sure yet 
) with the 1st chapter and its over half as long as this....I think......I JUST KNOW ITS LONGER! 
~Twinkie Pinkie
Hi Twinkie Pinkie. I am in 7th grade. I thought that was really good!!!11
hello, I go first year in high school and I liked it.
