Anon befriends the apple family while working on their farm. Applejack gets a little more than she bargained for.
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After this chapter, I think I may need to go listen to my angry music for a while... I was almost right there with Anon, just full to burstin' with rage. Honestly, I relate to Anon here. I do the exact same thing when I'm furious or in some kind of weird head state.
I walk away without a word. I remove myself from the situation to both clear my head and to keep myself from accidentally hurting those around me. But... Just like Anon here, sometimes it has the opposite effect. I end up hurting them anyway. And then I feel like I want to run, to flee, to disappear and never come back.
Anyhoosies, great chapter! Can't wait for the chapters to come! Absolutely loving this story so far.
Of all the fics written on this site, and all the various ways authors have described Discord, this is probably the best way he has be written to leave the scene.
Wow. I don't think we've ever had such a good second person view of Fluttershy 's stare!
The thoughts and feelings described while under its effects were well done.
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I was ready for a heartwarming walk in the forest. Now I'm stuck with bad feelings. Not that that's a bad thing, writings great keep it up :)
Two weird turns in two chapters. Not really encouraging, man. That whole last third smelled of really cheap, forced drama. Him just up and leaving like that didn't feel natural at all. And, for fucks sake -
She straight up made him relive what seems to be one of the worst memories of his life, come on, you fucking doormat, don't just immediately forgive her for that.
Yeah I kinda have to agree with the previous poster. Shy did him wrong here and he should absolutely be furious. Also the drama level is high relative to the “interesting things happening” level.