Agreed on awkward parties! I have to say you've done a great job building up tension on the reactions and thoughts of Twilight, Rainbow Dash, and Applejack all at the same time, while still having Fluttershy's internal struggle. I can't wait for more!
I'll say it before and I'll say it again, you are definitely my favorite author on this site. I simply love your characterizations, and everything flows so naturally.
Fluttershy and Twilight really need to clear the air. I can't imagine how Rainbow is going to take the news of Trixie back in town, let alone at Fluttershy's for the past week or so. Happy Holidays and Happy New Year to you too.
What a nice one! Rarity is a perfect friend - trustworthy and understanding. The way she proposed talking to others about Trixie - what a deed - generosity in flesh, no less! And that scene with Flutters hugging Trixie in her sleep - so heart-melting! Happy New Year, everypony! Health and joy to all of ya, mates!
Ummmm. Was that "our" already planned or did you take an idea from my comment? Also, I watched Hurricane: Fluttershy earlier today. It really helped the sauna discussion have VOICE.
I’ve got better things to do than worry about Twilight being Twilight. She suppressed a small snort of contempt, as she shook a fine mist of spray out from her wings. It’s not our problem.
Oh Rarity, I'd forgotten how much fun you are to write for.
A slightly-belated Merry Christmas to all! Have a chapter!
Huh... I don't remember favoriting this story... I don't remember it at all
I apparently haven't read any of it either
Strange, very strange...
Poor Fluttershy. I wonder when Trixie will make her have this reaction?
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Of course Rarity would not only forgive Trixie, but also spread the word for Fluttershy. After all, she is the Element of Generosity!
And that last line...Fluttershy doesn't know how wrong she is.
I like it!
This party is gonna be good.
Hmm things are about to get really interesting.
The party should be deliciously awkward.
Agreed on awkward parties! I have to say you've done a great job building up tension on the reactions and thoughts of Twilight, Rainbow Dash, and Applejack all at the same time, while still having Fluttershy's internal struggle. I can't wait for more!
1876239 That's still my favourite pony gif of all time.
1876474 I have a feeling the party chapter's going to be incredibly fun to write. :3 Glad you liked the chapter!
1876194 Bizarre. Trixie-hypnosis, perhaps?
I'll say it before and I'll say it again, you are definitely my favorite author on this site. I simply love your characterizations, and everything flows so naturally.
Merry belated Christmas to you as well.
1876512 He's one of my favorites too
Famous last words, Fluttershy. Famous. Last. Words.
This party's gonna be AWESOME!
Fluttershy and Twilight really need to clear the air. I can't imagine how Rainbow is going to take the news of Trixie back in town, let alone at Fluttershy's for the past week or so.
Happy Holidays and Happy New Year to you too.
Yeah.... I can see THREE problems. AJ being overprotective, RD is gonna wanna pound Trixie, and Twi... she is gonna be Trixie's stalker
Alicure, that's a new one.
Secondly, I like french-speaking Rarity, may I see more of it?
What a nice one! Rarity is a perfect friend - trustworthy and understanding. The way she proposed talking to others about Trixie - what a deed - generosity in flesh, no less! And that scene with Flutters hugging Trixie in her sleep - so heart-melting!
Happy New Year, everypony! Health and joy to all of ya, mates!
Ummmm. Was that "our" already planned or did you take an idea from my comment? Also, I watched Hurricane: Fluttershy earlier today. It really helped the sauna discussion have VOICE.
i feel a disturbance in the force young writer
flutters is getting a bit salty