I also got a wingboner three times this chapter: at the beginning, when Trixie and Fluttershy met up with Pinkie Pie, and by far the stiffest one I got was from when Fluttershy saw Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie!
What an excellent story. While I'm not normally a big fan of shipping or Trixie, I don't regret a single moment spent reading this well written work :D
Poor Cygnus. Working up the courage to talk to a mare like that, and he picks the shyest one in town.
I love Rarity's reaction to Trixie, that was very gently handled. The bit with Cheerilee was nice too, considering what's gone down in Ponyville an Ursa Minor only barely ranks.
What a nice chapter! I'm so glad that AJ was cool with Trixie - the moment of them having a hoofshake was so touching! But poor AJ! How can RD be so unsensitive - unless it's just her plan to make AJ jealous and somehow manage to get together again. Arrgh, both of them are really die-hards, so much in common in personalities - but when breaking up this toughness woks against them, keeping them hurt each other without realizing it. Rarity - a perfection, as always. Jokes, having fun at the party - and suddenly such a deep insight? She's just a marvellous pony (may be even marEvellous). What's the matter with Twiley? And where're the next chapter? I'm dying to see it! James, have my big thanks. You rock, woo-hoo!
There you go, this story ain't dead! Part two is in the editing works and should be also read to go pretty soon. Anyway, enjoy!
(Joke) Alt. Title: All You Need Is Blood
Hope twi is manipulative or at least somewhat sly. Kinda getting bored of Twilight going into full meltdown over every little thing
You can practically feel the awkwardness at times, heee. Can't wait for part 2!
Sees update.
Has this reaction:
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I will now proceed to read!
Typo alert!
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I also got a wingboner three times this chapter: at the beginning, when Trixie and Fluttershy met up with Pinkie Pie, and by far the stiffest one I got was from when Fluttershy saw Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie!
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Speaking of Rainbow Dash, I wonder why you didn't show us how her reconciliation with Trixie went?
And reading about the fallout of the relationship that Rainbow Dash and Applejack had...my...my feels...
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Nice job having Ms. Cheerilee put things in perspective for Trixie!
And Rarity, Tempting Fate is never a smart move! Let's just hope the situation can still be salvaged...
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What an excellent story. While I'm not normally a big fan of shipping or Trixie, I don't regret a single moment spent reading this well written work :D
“I just hope we’re not too late.” Damn it, Rarity!
i agree with all other comments
Poor Cygnus. Working up the courage to talk to a mare like that, and he picks the shyest one in town.
I love Rarity's reaction to Trixie, that was very gently handled. The bit with Cheerilee was nice too, considering what's gone down in Ponyville an Ursa Minor only barely ranks.
2057612 GASP That typo was taken care of! How did it sneak it's way into the final draft!
2063310 It was a Sneaky Mcsneak, that's how!
2057612 Woo, so many pictures!
Gah, typo! *Flails arms maniacally trying to make it go away* Thanks for flagging that up, I'll chop it out now.
2057334 Ohh, I have plans for Twilight.
2059096 2062238 Thanks guys, glad you enjoyed it!
2063350 Sneaky McSneakypants is totally Pinkie's spy alter-ago.
2063445 No, that's Pinkamena!
What a nice chapter! I'm so glad that AJ was cool with Trixie - the moment of them having a hoofshake was so touching! But poor AJ! How can RD be so unsensitive - unless it's just her plan to make AJ jealous and somehow manage to get together again. Arrgh, both of them are really die-hards, so much in common in personalities - but when breaking up this toughness woks against them, keeping them hurt each other without realizing it.
Rarity - a perfection, as always. Jokes, having fun at the party - and suddenly such a deep insight? She's just a marvellous pony (may be even marEvellous).
What's the matter with Twiley? And where're the next chapter? I'm dying to see it!
James, have my big thanks. You rock, woo-hoo!
2068391 Fun fact: James is my real name!
Twice the distance from the center to either end.
Was Pinkie drinking with Doctor Hooves? Or did she just order a Galactic Gargle Blaster again?
Urp.
Cheerilee: 1, Trixie: 0.
Well played, Rarity. I really love your portrayal of her in this fic!