I'm honestly not bothered that my headcanon for this story's past got kind of punched by the new episode, because the it was just such a good episode. That ridiculously cute faceplant. So yeah, this story is now kind-of-AU at this point, although I'm not 100% sure it's AU-enough to get tagged as such.
Thank you so much for that chapter! So warm and tender, so intimate in such a little bit teasing way. And the poem - we learned it in school on our english literature classes! Isn't that a kind of magic? Oh, now I'm simply DYING to see them sharing a first kiss - gosh, I'm blushing hard even thinking about that! Especially after these little things about Lotus, Aloe and Spitfire's poster ;) That's again the art of a storywriting - make your readers want something to happen as much as characters do! Brilliant - as always. Have my thanks and appreciation.
Fluttershy and Trixie care for each other deeply, but are afraid to hurt the other. They are very close friends though. I look forward to when Fluttershy goes to Twilight to talk about Trixie. Keep up the good work.
1745030 This story is good enough to say to hell with season 3! Don't change a thing about this story, other than keep the chapters coming! This is one of the ones that I eagerly await updates for.
I am with Kwakerjak on this point: If you began your story before the new season, regardless of how your story gets Jossed thereafter, its grandfathered in.
Sorry. Didn't sleep last night and that person's pic has been bothering me. Really good chapter, but I slightly suspect outside interference. Some of the time their voices sound odd, like with the Spitfire poster conversation.
1781259 In my opinion, it doesn't matter if the fic is old or not... There are still no romance stories out there which top yours. Cloudy Skies comes in a close second, but his stories are a tad more adventure based than romance based.
I did spot one thing though... THE DREADED SPELLING/GRAMMAR ERROR!!!! DUN, Dun, dun................... it's a little bit of both, hence the slash
The narrow pass had widened out, leading the mare’s onto a circular hilltop that was almost perfectly flat,
... I think the mare Fluttershy needs to ask for advice isn't Twi, it's Cloud Kicker.
“That was just confirmation. A magical mark for a magical pony.”
And you never considered that maybe your cutie mark just meant you had a magical flair for showmareship? I mean, despite occasionally getting run off, you still made a living travelling the country and putting on shows.
Have a chapter!
I'm honestly not bothered that my headcanon for this story's past got kind of punched by the new episode, because the it was just such a good episode. That ridiculously cute faceplant. So yeah, this story is now kind-of-AU at this point, although I'm not 100% sure it's AU-enough to get tagged as such.
Anyway, have some fluffiness, and enjoy!
Thank you so much for that chapter! So warm and tender, so intimate in such a little bit teasing way. And the poem - we learned it in school on our english literature classes! Isn't that a kind of magic?
Oh, now I'm simply DYING to see them sharing a first kiss - gosh, I'm blushing hard even thinking about that! Especially after these little things about Lotus, Aloe and Spitfire's poster ;) That's again the art of a storywriting - make your readers want something to happen as much as characters do! Brilliant - as always. Have my thanks and appreciation.
Fluttershy and Trixie care for each other deeply, but are afraid to hurt the other. They are very close friends though. I look forward to when Fluttershy goes to Twilight to talk about Trixie. Keep up the good work.
1745030 This story is good enough to say to hell with season 3!
Don't change a thing about this story, other than keep the chapters coming!
This is one of the ones that I eagerly await updates for.
Another awesome chapter, I just can't wait for the next
So you're not gonna let the new episode affect your story? That's great to hear.
I am with Kwakerjak on this point: If you began your story before the new season, regardless of how your story gets Jossed thereafter, its grandfathered in.
AND THEN THEY ALL FUCKED!
Sorry. Didn't sleep last night and that person's pic has been bothering me. Really good chapter, but I slightly suspect outside interference. Some of the time their voices sound odd, like with the Spitfire poster conversation.
Too many romance fics replacing my sleep I think.
1775536 Dammit, now my fic feels old!
1781259 In my opinion, it doesn't matter if the fic is old or not... There are still no romance stories out there which top yours. Cloudy Skies comes in a close second, but his stories are a tad more adventure based than romance based.
I did spot one thing though... THE DREADED SPELLING/GRAMMAR ERROR!!!! DUN, Dun, dun................... it's a little bit of both, hence the slash
Should just be 'mares'.
... I think the mare Fluttershy needs to ask for advice isn't Twi, it's Cloud Kicker.
And you never considered that maybe your cutie mark just meant you had a magical flair for showmareship? I mean, despite occasionally getting run off, you still made a living travelling the country and putting on shows.
Oh the fluffmanity!