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This does add detail to that scene in Babel, of Celestia recounting her sins.
I want to congratulate you. That whole sequence of Rose worming here way through the tunnel ignited my claustrophobia like crazy.
And that is how Soarin dies. What a way to go. Ties in greatly to what we see from Spifire in AHF and Celestia's nightmares from Babel.
I really like how you're making Rose's actions carry over into the greater plot of Scorchedquestria. Her being the one to send out the alert to the Crystal Empire, for example.
The only worry now, though (aside from everything else), is whether the trust of Bulwark, Parade, Golden, and the rest will hold up long enough to see them through this. Or will petty arguments and butting heads wind up killing them all? I'm riveted to my screen waiting for each new update. Just because we know how this all goes, doesn't mean that these characters wont make it out alive somehow. Maybe. Possibly.
"Time to be the bravest coward!"
A great little passage. Incredibly bleak and poignant.
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I finally got my final outline situated with all chapters named and I am EXCITED to finish this up. I cannot wait to show you all how this unfolds.
I wonder where the Bolts were all this time until now.
Wait I thought celestia got soarin in cloudsdale?