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It feels like they are trying to find a reason to continue.
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You'd be very surprised at just how little force on a precise point (the tapered bottom tip of a wood and metal tower shield) hitting the right thing it takes to cause a lot of damage. Especially if said thing is an unarmored neck.
Oh that is b r u t a l
I'd say you captured that "burnt out and exhausted" feeling well.
I was on the edge of my seat the entirety of this chapter even though no Unicorns showed up until the end. Great sense of tension and anxiety, especially for that moment when Tempest passed out.
The worst part was that I knew for a fact that Rose (Loveable garbage fire that she is) would leave her if she had to. Glad they're still sticking together, though.
This... is concerning. We know that they're smarter than they let on, we know that they're capable of coordination, we know that they can figure things out. What if they're figuring out where the tunnels go?
Which brings up another question that's freaking me out. It's been a couple days, right?
Where are the Princesses?
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Oh yeah if Tempest didn't wake up Rose would have 100% left her to die. She would've felt bad about it though.
The fuck is this shit?
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Hehe do you really want to know where they are?