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I will probably need more sleep to adequately give the proper review this chapter needs. Oh well.
First off, once again you have outdone yourself with the descriptions of emotions each of the characters feel. Definitely hurt to read how Tempest feels, and the completely opposite mindset that Rose is locked into. Really drives home how monstrous Rose has really become.
Also love the tidbit near the end of the chapter, showing that even while transformed Cadance and Shining hold enough of themselves to be together.
So that's why the Princesses destroyed Canterlot! It wasn't a psychological attack to demoralize any survivors. It was Cadance getting pissed and then the other Princesses joining in.
As tense as that chase scene was, I can't help but also find it somewhat wholesome. Even as mutated, violent monsters, Cadance and Shining Armor still care for each other.
Not that it does the survivors any favors, though. Our hero and her insane companion just can't catch a break.
I don't know how they're going to get out of this one. I'm hoping this will finally knock a little bit of sense back into Rose, but I'm not holding my breath. Either she manages to keep these impulses in place, or Tempest isn't making it out of these tunnels.
This is going to be a tragedy and I don't think I'll be okay when it happens. This is going to hurt. I want to scream at Rose so badly that, no, Tempest genuinely cares about your crazy ass!
I get the feeling that Rose has suffered some pretty bad nerve damage of some sort with the pins and needles sensations she's been feeling, along with a badly damaged shoulder. Probably gonna bite her in the ass later down the line.
With Rose loosing it nore and more, and woth Tempest actually saving her, we're probably looking at the most tragic moment in the story in a chapter or twoWell that answers questions as I doubt either pony survives from this thing.
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If they were dead this story would say “complete”
This chapter is killing me, I can’t really describe it much better than that. I can only hope there will be at least one survivor by the end of all this.