A mare takes a walk down a Ponyvillian borough, the ponies are busy with their lives.
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Put more into the description.
Just saying the ponies are busy makes absolutely no sense.
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“I am busy” implies you are doing things, often too much to attend to someone. The ponies in this story are certainly busy, with their lives specifically.
But I did indeed change it because it really doesn’t matter, the description works as a hook either way.