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4423374 You have five months before season 5 utterly destroys this story's canon.
4423384 Pffft. Naw, if they're gonna have any season be a "History Season," then it'd be season 6 or 7.
Every chapter of this makes me wish it was a real game, or at least confirmed canon, something! You always have such great ideas.
That bath scene though~
If Shae is supposed to be an ancestor of Twilight, I can't help but wonder why make her a lesbian? Two mares can't continue a family bloodline unless Shae cheats on Rose with a stallion...
Just wondering.
4425603 I've got it all worked out. And bi the way...
4425776 Ah...I was curious. Thanks for clearing that up!
A quick question: How would Tohro's voice sound?
4426020 Like a classier, older, cooler version of Ron Weasley. Why?
4426110 I'm going to make a reading of this at the end of June. Need to get some voices straight and Tohro is my favorite character.
4426150 Oh dear! Thank you kindly.
Mind that Rosemary has a subtle Scottish accent. So does Lady Tangerine, but she's hiding it.
4426319 Well... my swedish might ruin it but I am getting accents. And think nothing of it. If there is something of Bethesda I love it's The Elder Scrolls and your writing caight my eyes and heart like Kkat did with Fallout. And the reason for June is because I get better payed then. My pay comes this friday but I have a shitton of bills to pay. Even appartments aren't cheap.
4426336 I can't wait for it, this sounds awesome!
4425813 Bi curious, do you mean...
Aye, Shae shall share her body enough to have kids.
4426319 One more question on the topic of accents: does everyone save for the ones you named have brittish accents? If so: How would you like for Caro to sound?
4430446 No, the main characters do not have British accents. Tangerine does fake one to cover up her Scottish one, though. Caro sounds more like Alex Mercer from Prototype, and Shae obviously sounds like Twilight. Wolf River sounds like Farkas from Skyrim... That should just about do it.
4430847 Okay, got it. Think I know how Mercer sounds.
4432712 Oh, crap. Did I forget to change it? Thanks for the reminder.
4457379 Yeah...
That's all I'm saying.
Wow, I caught up with the story. ...
Damn now I have to wait for more.
“Lying, traitorous bastard’s bleeding lying traitor bastard blood, and he’s gone invisible on us,”
Truly a line for the ages.
4541954 I based that off of something King Kai said in Dragon Ball Z Abridged. "I swear to God, Bubbles! In a trunk, off a cliff!"
4542817 I thought that was obvious. Just don't assume everything in this story is some sort of expy.
4545882 Oho, are you in for a shocker...
4546864 But she's not part of the Legion anymore, is she?
4423384 well, season three sure did a number on Fallout Equestria. I'm looking at you, Magical Mystery Cure!
I just noticed something: will there actually be elder scrolls in this story?
4553319 I've got it under control.
So, after catching up with the story, I went on Youtube to search for a theme I could recommend listening to while reading this. I found this while searching:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5WKCBn4l-uQ
Non-background music:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y-G2E0GFdpk
Extended:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mmKdT33cCiU
But honestly, I guess you can use this 10-hour loop of Skyrim's theme:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PdH5mXTWOG0
4555167 Actually, I have three themes for this story.
Eternal Return from Dragon's Dogma
Dangan, also from Dragon's Dogma
and this metal version of the Skyrim theme.
4555562 *clicks on themes and listens* Um, well then. I can safely say I'm impressed. Just disregard that last comment o' mine.
This is a really comprehensive make on teh gap between Hearths Warming, Which given it has a big heart and deals with warmth of freindship I still say should be Hearts warmng, and rise of the diarcs.
Im puzzled at the glass armor, cos wouldnt it have to be insanely thick to handle an impact due to brittleness, no matter how strong, hard it is?
Apparently there is a chemical basis for why adding death cap mushroom to weapons iron helps, apart from teh carbon, it contains vanaidium, which leads to damascus steel, and alchemist weapons masters. Lots of research there for Shae.
Shokenda will end up being Chrysalis, given so far its impossible to finish kill an alicorn? Or is this where the first Elements will be used, that Rosemary has been collecting?
Given better weapons have softer, flexible cores, and harder brittle casing, would a diamond coated gold slab do better than steel, or fail even to bronze, so it would be useful as well as decorative? What if someone hammered layers of gold or copper and silk together?
Want to see how the necromancer is taken care of. Stop corrupting, reraising the dragons.
So I just caught up with the story and I love it.
it's a good Skyrimesque fic and you made the reading worthwhile until now. Keep that up man.
Dragon
Very nice. Can't wait to see more!
Good news and so far no bad ones: I get my pay tomorrow(Thank GOD, have been working overtime like crazy) so I'm bying the mic tomorrow eve. Just three things I wanna ask: How is Shae pronounced? Do you have the original pic left? And how do you want Xephyr's voice to be toned? To be honest I imagine him in my voice: I'm bass and for his songs I have good use of it.
However, whenever I imagine his accent to be like Zecora I somehow make him sound like Rajesh Koothrappali...
4616442 That's... a perfect voice, actually. I should totally have Shokenda say, "ALL SHALL LOVE ME AND DESPAIR!!
I just marathon'd this story. It cost me a night's sleep, and I have no regrets. I'm loving it so far.
it is quite an
interestingdownright amazing little story, and quite an interesting take on equestria (it reeks fairly strongly of Skyrim, but i get a feeling thats the point)The only problem i really have is the main character, Caro, he comes off frequently as arrogant, careless, entitled, and downright nasty at times (even childish sometimes), yet no matter how many times he is knocked off his high-horse (ha horsepun), no matter how many times he is taught humility, no matter how many times he is shown the error of his ways, he always springs right on back about half a chapter later, he never thinks or dwells on it, he never considers the responsibility that his power carries. I understand that your trying to keep a consistent character, but i think he needs to display some postitive development and maturation at some point, because its making him a rather unlikeable character.
On an unrelated note, have you heard the Skyrim metal theme by 331ERock? its pretty sweet.
4696671 Yes, I have heard that theme (It's bloody awesome), and I understand your concerns about Caro. I think in the upcoming chapters, you'll see some changes in his attitude. See, I meant for him to be a deconstruction of a Bethesda protagonist, especially the Dragonborn. After all, if I had some special powers and the ability to change the world, I'd probably become a bit of a brat myself.
I don't know if it was intentional, but I got some serious Dark Souls vibes when Mistral talked about JOLLY COOPERATION! :p