1861923 Do comment what you think as you read, like you usually do.

You're one of the few fans I have to genuinely use constructive criticism.

Many face palms were had at the minecraft references. Will either edit or make another comment when I finish this chapter.
Edit: great chapter as always. Very different and I like it that way.

and was rewarded with an arrow in the knee.

well i saw that coming lol

All those minecraft references. how very funny.

Ezio. Really? You have a pony call Caro Ezio?

Wouldn't that have been better for a mistaken ASSASSIN?

Just sayin'.

~Skeeter The Lurker

This chapter turned into a glorious game of "spot the references" without sacrificing storytelling.

Also, Caro gets the full Fus Roh Dah immediately? Overpowered, yet awesome!

I've forgone posting up to this point' but I have to commend you for doing an arguably better job than the actual writers for Bethesda.

Dren! Class is about to start. Get to keep reading later, I suppose. Ah well...

“Tar’okim vas ork’la heka maar aartu detu tenosaara moe’mo glisnok ko’ora ro kaan tre’yark hoaardokes ske paarth yokanok esko beth’roas thaan tu shal’kan forkestal stratos!”

What does this say?

Precursor... Infection...
You managed to combine Assassins Creed an Halo!

So the dragons have a few neighsayers in their ranks.

There’s even diamonds down here! But watch out for creepers! Oh yes, terrible things!”
It might even open the Nether or the Enderlands!”

the minecraft references...

“Tar’okim vas ork’la heka maar aartu detu tenosaara moe’mo glisnok ko’ora ro kaan tre’yark hoaardokes ske paarth yokanok esko beth’roas thaan tu shal’kan forkestal stratos!”

this is not dovah vun.

2045685 So did I.

1868320 I will admit, this has gotten pretty interesting and I like the amount of relevance you put into this and making it as much like Bleak Falls Barrow as possible while making it your own story.

It's been a fairly interesting ride so far. i must say, i love the dragon eyes bit, wish they gave my character those in Skyrim

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There's an option in the character creation that let's you have draconian eyes.