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No idea how theyre going to get out of this. Thought Caro would have to level up an awful lot more to take out Shokenda, and then theres the entire city to stomp him afte?
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Yeah, but we aren't the authors of that story. I'm not really happy with this, but I still like and enjoy the story non the less.
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I pride myself on subverting expectations. This is part of that. Much like being in love, it gets boring if there aren't a few surprises along the way. That said, I wish I had supplied a little more buildup for Shae and Rosemary's relationship.
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As I said: I may not approve a certain thing, but I still like/love that story of yours!
Can't wait to continue reading, when the next chapters are out.
Cheers
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What a chapter, I am really impressed by the breakdown of Shokenda Blackwing and how she came to be. 10/10
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Geez louise I take a seven month hiatus and I miss out on the backstory of one of the story's main antagonists. I don't know why but I always thought that Shokenda was Saviikaan in disguise and was using the civil war to wipe out the ponies to save himself some trouble. I guess that was because of her knowledge of the dragon tongue and the second battle of Ghastly Gorge(?) where she ordered that one uber poison dragon to attack Caro. Well anyway, you once again manage to impress with your writing stylistic choices; first that scene with the changelings several chapters ago and now what you did this chapter to show the damage to the memory orb, pure genius. I can't believe that I ever put off this story for so long, I can't wait to catch up with the rest of the story.
P.S. While I find the coupling of the series main characters to be unconventional, you have done a good job weaving those relationships into the story so don't pay any mind to some of the haters out there.