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How curious...
I feel like I read this very same passage on FimFic before...
Anyway. Love it, if one thing can be learned, NEVER piss off Rosemary.
~Skeeter The Lurker
3691469 Aye, an' that goes fer any who dare call themselves Scoltish!
Well, that was interesting. And entertaining. Too bad about Jade, though I suspect this isn't the last we'll be seeing of her.
I vote they drag Sacred Rite back to the orphanage from earlier and have Caro kill her the same way he killed the hag from earlier.
3716733 Trust me, she's going to get much worse.
3763011 That was an early problem with my early chapters, I admit... I hope you see improvements further down the line.
The way I see it, though, there's only so much you can show through dialogue and actions alone. Some things just have to be told.
3763152 Would be a pain to have a bunch of chapters dedicated to finding word walls.
3763307 Watch as those character types get turned on their heads later on.
3763497 That I do. Thank you.
First time we see Jade, aaaannnndddd she's...gone? Huh, and I was looking forward to meeting her, too.
What's taters, precious?
Really loving this story by the way!