Shepard dies at the end of the war with the reapers, a decision made a price paid. Now alive and moving forward in a new world Shepard now specter moves though life as a Pegasus in ponyvile as Captain of the weather teamhow will she make do?
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Not bad. You've got some missing words and punctuation, repeated words and what I think are run on sentences.
I look forward to seeing what kind of shepherd we'll be following.
Will shepherd or Specter be a seventh element or will she have her own adventures outside of the mane six?
I have no editor and haven't gotten that far yet
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Click on the chapter name, there should be a edit button by the title, then double check to see if the chapter stayed published after edits.
I've been told that its a good idea to wait a week between drafts, makes it easier to spot mistakes or something.
I myself have found that its a good idea to think ahead at least to a cliff notes level.
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I normally double back and look through it and read some of the parts the are there and think on them before changing them or parts around them so also I used text to speech on my phone to type all this not all "all" but most of it and