You know, I always wanted to be a brain surgeon.
Five months after the Fall Formal, Sunset Shimmer was Canterlot High School’s least popular student. Fluttershy was taking a scenic route home from the animal shelter one weekend early April when she saw Sunset in need of a helping hand. She decided that someone needs to reach out to Sunset first, and that she would be glad to fill that role.
This story was my entry to the Spring Fling contest celebrating the tenth anniversary of the first Equestria Girls movie.
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Fun story! This is such a nice pairing, and you did it really well.
A lovely tale and quite an excellent beginning if you decide to write a sequel or turn this story into a series. I'll be keeping an eye out for more.
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Thank you! Sunset and Fluttershy are definitely my favourite Equestria Girls pairing.
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Many thanks! I do not yet intend to continue this as it is meant to stand alone for the contest, but it is an interesting thought.
More please🥺🙏🥰
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Thank you!
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Thank you for the support, but I do not currently intend to keep going with this story. Although you are the second to suggest it, so maybe I will someday.
Thanks for choosing to publish your first story for this contest! Fluttershy being among the first to reach out to Sunset after the events of the first movie is a classic premise for a reason, and it was nice to see a bit of budding SunShyne in the contest. The dialogue does have some points where the characters don’t quite sound like themselves, such as when Fluttershy fairly abruptly starts quizzing Sunset on Equestria. But it is sweet, and so thank you for the submission.
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Thank you for hosting the contest, I needed something to write for or else I would never have gotten started! As for the dialogue, I agree that it needs work. I figure that eventually I will be a better writer, and when that happens I will know how to fix such issues. For now, since that the contest is over, maybe I will go back over this and see if I cannot improve the writing.