Yes!!! Finally, it's out! I am very happy! Thankyou

AW HELL YE

An excellent start for the second part of this journey. I wonder has Anon explained the meaning of "Ass", that everypony seemed to think being about donkeys.

Yooooo it's back BABY!

Interesting start. Anon and Twilight clearly have a rough relationship at this current time, but I see it improving over time. Having Chrysalis surrendering could lead to some interesting routes for the story. Is she really surrendering? Is she doing it to try and save her lings and provide them a better future? So many questions and I love it. Awesome first chapter friend.

The plot THICKENS!!!

Oh please let this be RGRE af. Also....hehe titty sprinkles.

Haven't started to read it yet, but this is gonna be pog. And that foursome and really long tongue thing makes me think Chrysalis is going to either kidnap anon, or join his herd, and I really, really hope it's the second one.

Aaaaaaaaa! It's here

My body is ready for this roller coaster ride of a story!

Oh, that ending..... starting off strong, I like it.

"She's... surrendering."

Wow, what a way to open up the new story!

Oooooo sequel and what the hell are you planning bug queen

AND HE'S BACK!!!! I never thought I would see a sequel to this story! Woot!

Whoa a sequel, It's been a while, imma go back and re-read the original.

Bookmarking for now. I'll get back to this when a few chapters have built up and probably after I've reread the prequel another time. Really excited to get back into it.

Alright, ya got my attention... again...

"Oh, Morning Wood, your highness." Morning Wood bowed.

I haven't gotten past this part yet but I would like to beg for your permission to use this name for a blink and you miss it side character in a story I'm working on.

This is going to be awesome.

As a funny french man once said...

"Pornography"

Your telling me I gotta wait till Friday!

Great start, and will we get images for the foals?

Heck yeah its out looking forward to read it goodday to you sir tips fedro

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You have my blessing

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Perhaps...

Wow, incest was so good they released incest 2

Ahora me pregunto si los potros seran alicornios o ponys normales o seran una abominacion entre humano y pony XD

"She's... surrendering."

Anon: All shall bend before the Might and Fury of the Frying Pan!!!

Twilight:

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Surprise b*tts*x

Huzzah for this story!

I was also laughing like a maniac with the fist to hoof bumb moment. The only thing missing was a 'Bow-Chicka-Bow-Wow'

Now this… this does put a smile on my face.

You just made my day, friend.

Huh I just took a look at the story picture and I'm wondering why Twilight is looking at Luna instead of cChrysalis

I wonder if the sister would have twins, or if there is already names planned?

Oh maybe they could combine their 3 names

Aww man here we go again

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Great start bud! As always your pacing, sentence structure, character building and nuance of their behavior is spot on and a joy to read! Now to get sleep, and in the morning, IM MAKING WAFFLES! I mean, I'm putting that Patreon subscription to good use!

Where did that come from?! Waffles, I swear....

Nice.

If I were married to him, I wouldn't feel very good about him nicknaming someone else that.

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I'd understand if it was just a random stranger but keep in mind that anon and twilight have known each other for quite sometime and have been through a lot with each other.

plus there's also the fact that anon is comfortable enough to use the guy humor with twilight which just shows how much he trusts her

Javelin quickly bumped Anon's fist, causing the man to make a fake explosion sound with his mouth and waggle his fingers as if they were the explosion itself. He quickly pumped his fist in the air.

Javelin, proving that some things are worth a month on the couch.

Anon sighed, "I know, Rave, but that's just it! I want to actually make some decisions! A whole year of Day Court sounds so... tedious." He exasperatedly explained.

i woulda called her Ray-ray...

Downloaded the whole fic to read on my kindle, and had to come here to comment. Lost my shit laughing at "Titty Sprinkles". Bravo and I look forward to reading the rest.

Quite the twist opening.