Just remember, the Tumblr was quite clear that Molestia doesn't do foalcon.

I like this to be story fun, But You don't have a [ OC ] or a main character living in this mass. I know what you are trying to do ~ but that style of writing is only good for Comic. I say its fun remember the pass but without a strong story your not going far "Sorry but the truth." Give a character some rule to follow and can't break , give your self a end goal to reach, and remember have fun "THIS is not work" so make it ( YOURS. )