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After building so much trust for her, his apprentice takes the potion he is meant to guard. Though she does not realize how much of a curse the potion is to those who are foolish enough to take it, the main issue is that his heart is broken. Not simply in the metaphorical sense, but also in the "blasted out" kind of way. Forgiveness does not seem like an option, but revenge may also be quite hard to accomplish.


Real:
So...I have never written a story. And I rarely dream, which may be from the fact that I think so much before I fall asleep. A few nights ago, I just wanted to sleep, so I couldn't really think of anything before dozing off. Aaanyways, I dreamt this up, but decided to just go write it down, I hope it doesn't suck too much. And it likely will just stay as a single page.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 3 )

This is a good or great story I can't decide. If there's more chapters let me know.

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Oh, wow, thank you very much. That is a...much nicer comment than I was expecting. I hope I can improve this and add another chapter or two, but I will have to wait and see when I have time. Anyways, I will let you know when I write another chapter. Have a great day!

11358798
Okie, added a new chapter. This one I actually tried adding a few spins onto, so I really hope it isn't too bad! Tell me what to change!

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