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Poor derpy
NEVER FORGET
"I just don't know what went wrong!"
Oooh, this ordeal will be Applejack's breaking point. She was the one who had Dinky do it in the first place.
SOMEONE PICK UP THE PHONE, CUZ I FUCKING CALLED IT.
i'm hoping for twilight next
break her horn off
let her suffer without her special talent
and remind her constantly
that she went from the princess's student
to a fuck toy in a shed
loool
or alternatively
scootaloo
because she would go insane
trying to protect rd
and it would destroy dash
to see her broken as well
Nooooooooooooo! Derpy why!?
...can't wait to see what happens next
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In honesty, Scootaloo would be your best bet for the new pony since your character has a predilection with filly abuse/rape and would enjoy her wings and would also use her to dominate rainbow dash further since she considers her a little sister and the character could enjoy breaking down her new found spirit. I am also looking forward to how Applejack will deal with the guilt of knowing she was responsible for derpy's death and how her relationship with dinky will progress now, and I also look forward to Dinky's punishment for her resistance.
Oh, I forgot to tell you that this was a superb chapter!
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Dude...that's just messed up...
It's about time something REALLY interesting happened!
I can't wait to see what Applejack thinks!
i really can't wait to see what happens once he gets hit fingers on rarity, or princess luna, that would be some funny shit.
I think bringing in Scootaloo would be so much more fun. But how would Flutters react to The Death of Derpy? And if she doesn't know, what would happen if she met Dash again? Oh gosh, I'd love to see what would happen if she and Dash met face to face again.
Why am I liking this twisted story so much?
Finally, that retard got herself killed.
How about Octavia or Bon-Bon or Spitfire?
The entire chapter I'm busy thinking "there are so many typos it isn't even funny" then at the end I'm like "just burying her in the woods isn't that well thought out. You'd have to bring her body outside!" Now all I'm thinking is bury her in front of the shed so dinky can easily see.
You-you actually did it you killed one of em... I am happier then a... I don't even know but... just yes.
And dinky is gonna hate the fuck outta applesnack over there
This song summaries what the dead and all the feeling that Derpy Hooves is going trough
I would lock the body in with applejack and dinky so that dinkt has to live with the sight of her dead, retard mother everyday, and she will slowly build up a hate for apple jack and join you in your qust to
abotain the chaos emeraldsrape all the ponies.Seriously, A.J. Deserves to be punished severly for manipulating a child like that, and trying to end this most wonerful story.
Chapter name "Acceptable losses"
Gee, I wonder...
Also, man, get some pre-readers, seriously.
Unless what you aim for is to get more people mad using bad grammar, typos and skipped words
Oh this is gonna be good...
Whoever the new pony (or other; the notes on griffins might still be valid), Twilight would be a bad choice I think. She'd be perfect for the final confrontation instead.
He doesn't like magic, and it's one of the things that can deal with him. It'd be... poetic, really, if the last pony he manages to bring over would be the magic prodigy, who subsequently wipes the floor with him. Poetic and very satisfying.
Assuming you're not gunning for a full-blown Bad End, of course.
These are the types of stories that make people hate bronies.
In the end you should just kill all the ponies and make them into sex pushes.
BuahahahahahahhhaaAhhaha
Of all the things that don't make sense in this story, this chapter somehow takes the cake.
Rainbow Dash losing the fight in the first place? Unrealistic but whatever.
Fluttershy just backing down and not using the stare and generally being fine with the situation? Completely OOC but whatever.
Applejack surrendering when she had the upper hand and knowing that in doing so would get both herself and her sister raped? I honestly thought you couldn't beat that in nonsensical story lines.
But this one, wow, is a thing of utter retarded beauty.
How on Earth is Derpy biting the handle of the knife, which both hands are somehow on but out of reach of Derpy, and still have the knife pointed at her neck? Seriously! It isn't physically possible. Go put a knife handle in your mouth, now try and get it pointed at your neck. Unless you swallow the f*ing blade it won't be pointed at you neck, ever. It'd be an achievement to even get it pointed at your jaw.
So this blade basically has the longest handle ever and is shaped like a giant L.
Congragulations sir on damaging my sense of sanity enough that I actually posted a comment.
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Looks like you only skimmed through the story and thought of these.
AJ surrendered because she watched Dash's wing get broken and didn't want to see it happen to her other one. Also the last part with Derpy and the knife I said that she used her hooves to grab the knife. Regarding Dash losing the fight, I used her wings to the advantage to stop her from fighting.
Woo! finally caught up.I was expecting derpy to die because she was all banged up and you haven't used her in a while.but to go with the classic of child accidentally kills parent. Bravo sir Bravo.I was expecting it as a punishment.and hear me out guys but I felt some real pity for that little shit.I mean having a child "accidentally" kill their parent is a classic for a reason.
Sad
Why past me! Why did I send him Derpy! WHYYYY!
*sharpens knife* does anyone know where he is I want to pay him a visit
One word. LOL
3109164 what do you mean kill him or something else
Rest in peace Derpy