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Yes...join the darkside Fluttershy...
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Dinky, Dinky...
Somebody will be hurt badly
Oooohhh an uprising eh?
Guess someone will become an ORFAN.
And AJ must suffer too... One does not give those ideas.
Dinky. You are charged of accounts of trying to escape! Your Sentance is.. Insta-ORPHANAGE. MUHAHAHAHAHANA *Dinky blacks out*
Either Dinky dies, Derpy dies, or both of them do.
THE RIDE NEVER ENDS
The suspense is eating me alive!
updates is the best
I can see this playing out three ways, one the escape works and 'you' end up dead. The escape fails and dinky gets her horn broken off & Applejack feels bad, or the escape fails and either derpy or dinky die. Personally I hope it's the second one... I think there would be a bit more development rather then the story abruptly ending.
Well this is going to endbadly for Dinky and Derpy and not to mention it will probably end in filly abuse. I hope Applejack will feel very guilty for urging Dinky to resist in a futile situation....Yesss,
I was thinking this morning, "Gee, I wonder if Stealing Harmony is gonna update soon."
I log onto FIMFiction and I see this. I'm fucking magical.
Every time I read this story I worry about peoples mental health, but then I remember this stuff is awsome and I don't care about people.
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I believe that she already has
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I love where this story is going, and I hope the escape attempt fails. I personally think that it should be Fluttershy that stops it. Either by alerting the rapist or helping him stop it.
This chapter didn't seem to be written as well as your other chapters.
You wrote:
“Now…with hole do you want it in…”
I didn't know this guy had a lisp!
You also wrote:
showing hard much so built up
There were many other mistakes, but I don't want to list all of them. Most of them were minor.
Oh god, its allvso percarious 200th liker!
Am I the only one reading this and hoping the guy gets his shit kicked in by the princesses at the end.
4069782 yes you are
I really do wonder how he is going to counter unicorn magic or if the princesses come
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Yes