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Fluttershy has gone to the dark side. Excellent. Now, I believe we all know which pony is next. >
It just keeps getting better.
I got to say this story is nicely made for being mainly focused on rape. You got good character development and never seem to result to killing the ponies just for the dark and edgy factor. You break them down and seemed to us their real personalities very well. You got Fluttershy pictured as a very confused yet very horny mare. You got Rainbow Dash as the aggressive one and even gave a small back story to her attitude, and you even took a light hearted character and turned her into an over protective mother. I'm looking forward to how AppleJack gets changed up as well.
I'm honestly enjoying your story very much and look forward to reading future chapters of this.
This chapter is awesome! How about you tell Flutterslut to pleasure Dashie next?
This is so delicious!
Fluttershy spoke my mind exactly!!! How does it feel, Skittles?!
Oh how this story has improved...
Whore snap to the Bitch
a yellow pair <------ last i check she had one eye
Ohhh mind games!
Although I wouldn't mind seeing what was happening in Equestria with all the Elements of harmony shattered. Must be chaotic.
Whelp.
At least none of them gets off on caning or something like that. Imagine how humiliating that'd be: cumming not from the sex after the torture, but the torture itself. Though that might make things less fun for our protagonist... or perhaps not.
I came, MOAR!
"You couldn’t stop but picture yourself fucking 3 ponies at one time."
Cause I'm TNT, Dyno-mite!
Fluttershy has went to the dark side of the force
A few spelling errors here and there. (not going to promise to point them out since I keep forgetting anyway) And like it has been said before, the plot really makes this story.
I like how you make this newer version somewhat different from the previous greentext story, keep it up, different injuries etc, love it (inb4 rarity gets horn cut off, and dash wings).
I haveto admit i got somewhat frustrated when i saw that u cut of the greentext storyline, been following it for long time, and was somewhat negative towards this non greentext thing.
But i think it turned out great.
thanks!
Almost forgot, stop with the annoying sentences where you type out "they are nothing to me" etc, we understood it the first 5 times we read it.
I like how most of the commenters are complaining about this story, yet there are more likes than dislikes.
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This comment section. It amuses me greatly.
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An idea would be to bring in Scootaloo. That way he can use her as a means of torture for rainbow dash and he has another filly. Just an idea. :D
I love this more then I probably should.
And my hatred for the protag grows stronger.
1774731 same here