You're just a faceless human in a boring world but one day you get a unexpected visitor...
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This will be very interesting to see how he deals with Applejack considering her strength and temper... I imagine 'you' are going to have to get very creative....
You had a small filly beaten and abused. Can't wait for the next chapter!
are you still going to anal her first???
1641765 i would also like to see where this goes
I can't help but think something may be wrong with me when the highlight of my day is a rape story being updated.
I've finally figured out why I do this. It is because I enjoy the plotline so much, I don't want to see it get bogged down by grammatical errors.
And for ruin Dash? That doesn't make sense.
shouldn't it be you plan to break her until nothing is left.
her wings her broken? was the second her supposed to be were?
wont instead of want?
Yet again this chapter surprised me. I actually prefer the chapters where things don't go according to plan and it might be that this is going to start happening a bit more. I do have to wonder though about the character's understanding about what he does. He seems to think through his actions and yet at other points it almost seems like he is winging everything. More often than not I can't tell though and that is fine by me. Anyways, another fine job so till next chapter, i will be waiting.
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I'm also thankful you do this for me.
1642807 no its perfectly normal
"I trust you know better than you wander"
I'm not sure but shouldn't it be "better than to wonder" ?
Marvelous chapter and I'm still enjoying the originality of the story (I'm pretty sure ponyrapes are the common coin by now but still written with this level of graphic and character-developped detail deserves to be called original).
So here have some cool ponies dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Cloudchaser_dealwithit.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_dealwithit.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Rainbow_dealwithit.png
This story is preety good, it keeps the voices quiet and has some good tourture.
congrats you have more likes than dislikes now you get a a a and a . what that is all i got, i am broke all my ponies keep getting taken by a portal. :/
Stop smoking, it will leave you short of breath, meaning you can't rape for as long before needing a rest :(
Man, one of the things that make this story thrilling is that the rapist isn't invincible and I am never sure if he's going to get beaten and defeated.
It would be pretty cool is this ends with him helpless and the ponies make him die slowly and painfully.
1718836 If anything, that would be a horrible ending. The fact that it is second person, you are saying that you want "yourself" helpless and you want the ponies to kill "you" slowly and painfully. Anywho, I'm actually taking a liking to this story.
i want this guy to die. *gets pinkamena and butchershy* yup now you're screwed
1718836 I like your idea
3104396 that picture is amazing
Laughed my ass off when anon broke Dashie's wing again, then fell off my chair to ROFLirl after he played kick the baby with AB. This fic never gets old
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3 more years on and it’s still just as entertaining as the first few times i’ve read this fic