The Sun Horse found me at the verge of death, and through rudimentary communication offered to save me. I should have read the fine print. Now I'm bitter, small, and possess an underdeveloped frontal lobe. Why does she want me to learn 'friendship'?
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Thanks for the chapter.
The end of the chapter feels kind of abrubt to me; I expected to see Anon to reply to Blueblood, instead of the chapter ending mid-conversation.
I think she was trying to tease him and maybe give twilight something else to worry about.
Nice
can you imagine how adorable anon probably was after the feeding ^^
teasing flash was really funny xD
Have mercy on this colt author! Although I don't like him either, but still!
And death to Desiree
Instead of writing "he/she/they said" write "He/she opened her/his mouth" its much better
I really like your em dashes.
Staring at a plain wall can be kinda relaxing, to be honest. Especially with Anon's pillow bed that probably also props her head up to get some view of the ceiling. A good way to get your head empty and let your subconscious sort things out in the background. No thoughts, head empty.
Also, I didn't quite get the part when Anon fully faces Cadence and the gang. I had assumed she was still staring at the wall after noticing who came in. Even talked while facing the wall too.
I love the fact that Anon Filly is jailbaiting someone innocent. I am half expecting Flash to be the third pony she has traumatised in a day.
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Rainbow was always an unthinking hothead and this time hopefully the consequences of not thinking will get through to her.
Yeah, as long as it’s not that tool, Flash Sen-
Ri~ght.
Yup. That’s about right. Well done, Anonymous.
The entire first half of this chapter felt like a very long setup for "You're not you when you're hungry. Grab a Snickers" being the premise behind it.
And Anon playing with poor Flash Sentry was just too hilarious. It was kinda cruel, but way too funny to not laugh at.
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I'm of the opinion that being semi-predatory makes night ponies and changelings effectively more catlike in behaviour.
Poor Flash Sentry. I'm glad Anon is feeling better
I loved this entry, I cannot wait for another Flesh Sentry shenanigans.
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Changelings do seem to be rubbing their scent on everything...
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I must concur, every opportunity to make the ponies act more catlike should be taken!
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aw... its been a while since we saw lil miss anon being adorable. i demand platonic pony cuddle piles!!!!
Poor Flash...
Let me remind you, Anon, that it was you who made a deal with the Devil. Don't blame Hunger for everyhting you did.
Oh and one more thing: You should not be a cork for every bottle, you jerk.
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It needs to be remembered, that in the world of Equestria "the devil made me do it" isn't just something said to excuse bad behavior, but a real thing. When Discord first got loose, he demonstrated that he could make ponies do things against their will and completely change their personalities, to the point they don't even resemble themselves.
Anon might've approached Hunger first. But Anon currently has the brain chemistry of an 8 year old girl containing 20+ years of human trauma and massive trust issues; especially after finding out just how manipulative Harmony can be when it comes to getting what she wants.
There's a very good reason we don't let minors enter into legally binding contracts, and have child exploitation laws. And while Anon shares part of the blame, a whole lot of others are equally to blame. Twilight is also guilty because she outright refused to believe Anon had the mind of an adult due to coming from a species with a much shorter lifespan and developed at a faster rate to account for such. She refused to take such a possibility into account and stubbornly insisted Anon was just an eight year old filly.
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I think an 8-years old kid should have enough sense in them to understand the concept of "don't talk to strangers" and "don't talk to and stay away from creepy strangers". Espedially if they have 20 years of experience behind them.
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One would think.
One would also think that we as a species would know better than to: eat aquarium cleaner and take horse de-wormer as home remedies to covid, jump out of moving speedboats because it's trending on tiktok, and pull guns on random strangers so we can film their reactions and laugh at them for it.
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Yeah, yeah, but again; if by 8 years you did not teach your child to not talk, or, hell, interact in any way with strangers - sorry, you kind-of failed as a parent.
And, bringing back trust issues and that he was used by harm money - he probably should have had an idea that Hunger will use him, too.
"Why Boner 3..... THE RECKONING!!!"
I wonder if having a talk with a soldier that fought in a war could work for Anon, the problem is that with Equestria being in peace, the most near thing to that could be Celestia and Luna or maybe some other carnivore race. While Shining Armor and Cadence were captured by changelings during the wedding and Twilight and the other had her share of problems, they managed to solve things with the power of love and friendship
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Plus sometimes trying to the right thing doesn't go the way you want. Plus spirits don't think like mortals so getting them to fair and square from the start is difficult. You need a lawyer just to have a chance.
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Well unfortunately disaster planning there is rare and something that rarely ever needed so how many underlings do you think would be in the city help during a disaster that was so unexpected that nobody suspected it was coming.
I just binge read this
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I refuse to believe for a moment that there was not any personnel he could relegate that business to. That's what police/city watch/whatever ponies call it and emergency services are for.
This is the most out of character I have seen the story so far. Anon killed a shit ton of pedos but then turns around and does this?
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The problem was that law enforcement was already working for the mob boss. The locals had already tried that when Emerald mom died.
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We're not talking about Anon's situation here; we're talking about settling down the refugees.
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Being a psychopath does that to you.
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Yes but they probably have learned about her and that wouldn't be fun. Plus since when does law enforcement ever do more than they have to.
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Anon is still very much new to her new status as Hunger's newly created plaything. I honestly don't know just how much control she has over her own actions right now. We need more chapters so we know just where Anon ends and Hunger begins.
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It's not like she just went through a series of traumatic experiences, topped off by having her species changed yet again, or anything... I'd be more concerned if her character DIDN'T change.
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Plus with some mental health help and less life threatening danger to those she cares about she probably create spells that are not so deadly. She did what she felt was best at the time. It one those gray areas. Killing is never good but protecting others is always good. So what can you do.
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I doubt peaceful Equestria will celebrate a mass bloody murder.
As for whether or not... First, let me quote something that carved into my mind a long, long time ago:
And second, there are fates worse than death.
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Try as she may, she has blood on her hooves. Not necessary innocent blood, but she has blood on them. Much more than any other pony in Equestria, minus the princesses, maybe. But it's there.
As I've said, that kind of stuff does not just disappear from therapy and princesses cheating to give you calm dreams.
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True but can you change the fact that emerald step father would have made more people suffer and by his own choice. Anon doesn't like what she feels that she must do. But she has gone easy on the bad guys till now considering she didn't hurt queenie and tried to get rid of revenge seeking bullies but they didn't want that.
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I dunno, she seemed to be quite eager and trigger-happy when she did it.
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When she face emerald dad because probably he reminded her of her father plus most people find anyone who does those sorts of things with kids disgusting and want awful things to happen to them. She loved rune magic because it gave her the opportunity to protect those she cared for and now it was being threatened. Of course she is going to want to destroy the threat to that.
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Yes, indeed. But killing a criminal does not make you a hero; at best, you can claim self-defence and even then there are limits of self-defence. Don't think comitting a mass murder counts as self-defence. And at worst, you are now a criminal yourself. Vigilante justice ain't no justice.
As I've said, I am waiting to see if the mass murder she committed would come to bite her in the ass... though it's unlikely, seeing how she probably gotten a developer-approved god-mode.
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Well the people who job it was to handle stuff like that didn't do their job. So getting rid of a bunch of criminals who would have hurt someone. You saw that blueblood didn't show up until it was over that means that it might have been too late for him to save the day. What do you do to save the people you care about.
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Honestly, I had the exact same problem when I first started writing
Nothing of those older works posted though. And despite all the lessons I've learned from my first story, and more I've yet to learn, I still avoid reading the mess known to me as my early chapters. They might as well be completely alien works to me
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Yes, because everyone pretty much grabbed a moon-sized Idiot Ball right after the cemetary scene.
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Yes but if the cops had done their jobs and I'm guessing blueblood didn't realize how bad it was much less how bad her step father wanted her.
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/o\
Situation: Anon, Starlight and Trixie discover that Emerald's stepfather is a murderer and rapist, and sent a pony to spy on them.
You'd expect: They go to Blueblood and tell him about that, and stay surrounded by the royal guards, for their own safety.
Instead: They go back to the hotel.
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Yes for some reason nobody realized how desperate the guy wanted the kid though I don't know why. If they had maybe they would have done the smart thing and go with the guards to get their stuff.
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Because the story needed everyone to act stupid to progress, I reckon.
Phew, I haven't had a good story like this in a while... And to think I was found it because I found the sequel interesting...
11755690 Gandalf was extoling mercy onto a third party there - Frodo. I think the aggrieved party has a little more right to dish out judgement, just my opinion. As for the 'bloody murderer' comment, Twilight killed a WHOLE LOT of Pinkies that one time, and no one's the wiser. I think Celestia will be more than happy to brush Anon's rampage under the rug, to honor her for 'sinking' a warship single-hoofedly. It looks better in the papers that way.
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Plenty of people would disagree with you, especially their victims.