The Sun Horse found me at the verge of death, and through rudimentary communication offered to save me. I should have read the fine print. Now I'm bitter, small, and possess an underdeveloped frontal lobe. Why does she want me to learn 'friendship'?
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great chapter
Nice
I'm enjoying this story quite a bit. The cadence feels about right, and enjoyable.
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They better not be one of your brood up to no good in that alley.
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I may be up to no good causing trouble in your neighborhood but rules say don't take kids. Cause they can't get into a fight for their moms to get scared and moving them down with their uncle in bal-air
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Uncle (Thorax) in Hivair :p
The window being open, and the drained mana reserves suggests some sort of vampire. Whether or not Hailstone is the vampire remains to be proven.
Anon's being possessed. Classic wraith draining her energy.
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Considering the world and setting a Changeling seems more likely than a vampire.
I've seen a couple of stories done the path of journal entries before, but unfortunately, a sizeable amount of them don't seem like any normal journal entry, written or spoken accounts. It certainly doesn't seem Anon has enough time in between lull period of the story to write this much and in detailed.
It almost seems like the stories are written as if it was a regular first/third person story. Unless this is something like Fallout Equestria's memory orbs
Maybe Twilight could give a memory spell to help Anon remember?
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This definitely falls into the first category, and is very much a case of the author naming it 'what felt right'. The close it gets to being a true diary is conveying the daily life of our heroine, and her inner thoughts. Sorry if it feels like false advertising.
Why is it the assholes who always come back from the dead. I'm saying this cause there is alot of foreshadowing that his dad is back. Although it might make more sense if nightmare/nightmarebeast came back in the form of his father to get more fear energy from him for some reason.
That public apology felt unnecessary tbh.
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He may not be back. Anon was probably just experiencing his own inner darkness messing with his/her dreams. The threat currently in the waking world is more obvious. It seems Bug Horse has decided Anon is pretty tasty. This could also explain the dream. If all the positive emotions are being drained out, there will be little defense in protecting oneself from the darker ones.
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It probably was. But it provided Anon with the perfect opportunity to make the adults uncomfortable in a group fashion without getting in trouble.
Nemo slept during the day. And Daymare came to him.
She's gonna regret not telling anyone about the little vampire.