A new Daring Do movie is out, but Scootaloo can't see it. short one shot
I'm also Sonicx399 on fanfiction.net. I like to write stories about the Cutie Mark Crusaders and stuff.
A new Daring Do movie is out, but Scootaloo can't see it. short one shot
Awesome!
"Girls, maybe we should do something else besides getting our cutie marks, I mean, it's a Saturday, let's not have everypony hating us if we screw something." Suggested Sweetie Belle,
oh my sweetie belle
1292512 Whoops
Lol. That was a fun read.
Now, I'm not much of a reviewer, but I can say that this was pretty rushed and you need to add more to this, it's rushed and there are some grammar errors.
1295289 Thanks for the criticism.
It was a pretty good concept, but far to many grammatical errors.
I suggest taking time to proof read your stories for errors in the future.