• Member Since 28th Nov, 2011
  • offline last seen Oct 21st, 2013

RainbowSonicx399


I'm also Sonicx399 on fanfiction.net. I like to write stories about the Cutie Mark Crusaders and stuff.

Comments ( 7 )

"Girls, maybe we should do something else besides getting our cutie marks, I mean, it's a Saturday, let's not have everypony hating us if we screw something." Suggested Sweetie Belle,

oh my sweetie belle

Lol. That was a fun read.

Now, I'm not much of a reviewer, but I can say that this was pretty rushed and you need to add more to this, it's rushed and there are some grammar errors.

1295289 Thanks for the criticism.:pinkiehappy:

It was a pretty good concept, but far to many grammatical errors.
I suggest taking time to proof read your stories for errors in the future.

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