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I liked it! I’m sorry you got more downvotes than upvotes. The only criticism I would say is maybe I would like the sex scenes to be longer.
Also if you do more one shots will they continue to feature sage? Or will it be a different snake?
I think this should be my dears not my fears.
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I’m glad you enjoyed! The sequel stories will have a lot more sex, don’t worry. If I end up doing more one-shots it’ll be Sage or my other snake OC Athena. I wanted to publish this for the people who enjoyed my previous stories. I’d also like to emphasize that I’m not a writer by any means, I just know that there’s a niche audience that enjoys these types of stories and I enjoy sharing my works with them.
I feel like what you have here is the start of a very interesting world/AU with Sage as a main player. I’d love to see more from this story’s world!
Also, if you ever need a proofreader or the like to look over your story to catch any minor details you might have missed, I’d be willing to do it for ya!
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I’m glad you enjoyed!
And yes, I’d appreciate if you pointed out any errors in the story so that I can edit them out.
If I could get your thoughts on something — should Sage continue this Celestia/Luna harem or should I just do one shot stories with Sage?
So if you continue this Luna and celestia harem will you be having sage catch more women?
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Yes, that would be the plan going forward. Any one shot that I end up doing would also involve Sage interacting with different women as well.
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Okay then my vote going forward is continuing with the celestia Luna harem.
Maybe he can interact with tempest shadow next.
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Tbh if I were to do a hypno Tempest Shadow story I'd rather do her normal pony version. I can see about doing Tempest but I have other characters to do before then.
Fair enough. I look forward to the next part of this story!
I wonder if at one point sage will start singing trust in me to one of his targets?
I hope things are going well for you. Stay safe.
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I'm fine! Just may be awhile until I decide to upload anything to fimfiction. Very busy at the moment.
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Understandable.
Personally I love that Sage isn’t portrayed as Evil like so many serpentines are. He knows his talents and makes a reasonable agreement (Making sure they can keep their minds and life while he helps them relax and feel pleasure; on top of making sure they don’t freak out and he gets fed normally. Not a fan of vore so I love he isn’t trying to eat people
). Just for that alone I kinda wanna support ya. You got any suggestions?
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Honestly, just leaving comments like these is enough! I'll come back to writing eventually, but I'm glad you like Sage and the story!
Merry Christmas!