The beginning of the Bound By Blood Saga. This story focuses primarily from the perspective of Shadow Scythe as she, Zeloph, Moxxi and company venture to her home world to stop her enigmatic foe, Mortis. But he ain't the only thing to worry about.
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nice work as always! fall this year, a long away ahead
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It’s mostly a generous amount of time given how busy I’ve gotten!
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okay then
(1) Oooooo, interesting way to kick things off! A very hot scene between the Manor Twins and Dion! The descriptions were very hot to read, especially with the idea of the twins going into a more primal state and Dion having to bind them.
(2) Lol, Dion was so savage by fucking Ebony Ivory when it was Natural Selection's turn! Natural just took the L.
But of course, the Pundamilia Empire had to cause havoc, and just when the festival was about to end!
(3)
Honestly, they're very good lines, especially Sahel's ultimatum.
(4) Ya know, it's sad that Sahel and the three zebrican sisters (from Riding In Zebrica) have went into this dark path of war. Though three of them were forced into this, which hurts more given that they seemed to have made good friendships with Noble's tribe. But now they're just weapons. Sahel is less forgivable
(5) Oh dear, so even though the Twins could technically keep up and attack faster than the parasite, their mental link makes them extremely vulnerable when one of them gets tackled!?
Thankfully Dion was able to "go even further beyond" and get his Onoma! But of course, Sahel and his daughters quickly decided to change tactics so that they now could hold hostages. Unfortunately for Sahel, Viscera exists. And now he's the hostage.
Oh, and of course he has a portal, just what Viscera needs, and surely that would help destabilize the universe more eh? Wait, perhaps all the experiments were the reason the universe kept destabilizing even without Beatrix hopping? (Well maybe, later it was revealed that upon the system being destroyed the dark clouds were removed)
(6) Ah, I feel sad for everyone now (except Sahel, kinda neutral). The zebra sisters lost their father (what happened to Adila?), Natural Selection and Noble Savage are dead, and so many people died in the battle. It makes it kind of feel pointless in the sense that everyone lost something. Would Pyrrhic Victory be the proper term here?
At least Bellatrix is here now.
(7) Ah, long time since we've seen Mini/Demi Trix! Good to see that she's livening up the spirits!
So Ashen's ship is actually another eldritch monster? Huh. I guess there's now more people to help out in the war against Alma. Sad though that Haden feels that Beatrix has betrayed Oona, but he's Oona's father so it's understandable.
(8) Eldritch Beast and Rheneas time lol? Gotta say the way the clop is written is very hot!
And then Mini Trix and Ashen were added into the mix and while we don't get as much text, guess it would've been just as hot.
What's Demi-Trix's build like now? In terms of height, a mix between Moxxi's Imp form and Beatrix's? Well I guess this scene finally means she's grown up.
(9) Oh no! Demi-Trix just clipped into the Backrooms where the Cult of the Nemesis have their base! XD
So if a quarter of the universe has been obliterated, how many souls does that equal? And could it be repaired? Say another reset, or a different kind, to the one experienced in Lightendark Finale?
Also noooooooooooo! Omen! Please tell me you're going to be outplaying everyone again and that you're just acting like the ally to the Cult!
The man really has been playing all sides tho. He's Imposter level!
I had a feeling that, like me and the other readers, everyone in the story felt like Omen was another threat, but he was such a good person that, why not trust him? And we most likely ignored all the signs, even the strange text that would always be linked to Omen. Noooooooo.
And Mini Trix lost her memory, great.
(10) Oh, so does that mean this story will be put on hold until Fall? Or is it referring to Oona's mother's story being told in Fall?
Either way, I love this story! Yay!
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5) Other characters breaching portals is further damaging the multiverse, but it’s not the main source to the cataclysmic storm.
6) Given who she was last with, I think it’s safe to say that Adila is going through the worse pregnancy imaginable or dead. Whichever comes first.
7) Yep. Three Glamorguis that represent Land (Womb of Conception/Manor/Castle), Air (UFO) and Sea (The Nautilus/Airship).
8) Demi-Trix is meant to be more Matus than her previous iteration. So she’s at least close to a foot and a half tall.
9) The reset is what’s caused the universe to start collapsing. Another one like it would just speed up the process of annihilation.
10) The story revolving around the events in Zebrica have concluded and the stuff with Oona and the war of walpurgistnacht won’t be tackled until Fall 2023. Focus will resume on Zell and Shadow Scythe’s storyline.
Also, you likely misread the last bit. That’s not Oona’s mother who shows up.
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I also imagined Demi-Trix's build being a mix between Beatrix and Moxxi (though skinnier), not sure what Nota has in mind?
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(5) Ah alright, but it definitely removed the clouds for now right?
(6) nooooooooooo! Not another one of my OCs!
Well, I did give you two full rights to do whatever you want with them, so they're on their own I guess
(7) Ah, interesting. Are there more types? Like an 'Underworld' Eldritch Beast? Space (though I guess that would fall under Air?) Void?
(8) A foot and a half? Doesn't seem that tall to be honest. Don't know how high that is though so idk.
I guessed she was 3.5, 4, etc. But that might be Moxxi's height.
(9) How about the equivalent of a factory reset, or uploading a snapshot where the universe was much more stable? Though (1) this would likely erase everyone's memory (2) I have a feeling this was done and used to make the universe more unstable, given that I remember someone saying that the universe was going through massive loops, but the Lightendark prophecy would destabilize things enough to make change. Is that true?
(10) Dang it, I got distracted by the Fall 2023 thing. So Zebrica is over now? We won't be seeing that ever again? Or maybe not until another story, an epilogue, or something?
Well, I guess it would make sense that Fall 2023 would be the time when the other parts of the story would catch up to signify the beginning of the end for the two stories, with the battle in Oona's place soon to occur.
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8) Even if the multiverse somehow survives, the damage already done will be irreversible.
10) If Beatrix and friends somehow managed to fix everything, then there will likely be more stories about the Noble Tribe under Ebony’s command! But until then, our time there is over.
Also, I mostly set the Fall date due to the rate I’m working.
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(8) Oh no!
(10) Alright, well it was fun seeing my zebra OC sisters!
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I like the idea Demi-Trix can switch sizes, from fairy size to a doppelganger of Beatrix!
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ah cool
If Bellatrix had to use bondage to keep the twins in line, now I'm worried for them.😟
Dion should also know that just because it's vulgar, it doesn't mean that it's malicious.
I pray that this doesn't backfire for Ebony.
Why? You do know how much shit he's committed, right?😕
Somehow, I still don't trust him.😒
Victor Zsasz wants to know your location.
Want to bet?😠
Can they not fly independently?🤔
Change "skirts" to past tense, & "hoofs" to "hooves".
I've seen this trick many times before. How do we know you won't kill her anyway for shits & giggles?😠
You have problems, Viscera.
And you claim to be better!? You're poisoning, infecting, & mutating people left & right, giggling all the way!😡
But magitek can't be impossible to achieve, can it?😕
Do you even know who you're asking?
I bet Dion would accept the challenge.😆
Wait, the Nautilus? From 20K Leagues Under the Sea??😲
I'd never thought I'd see a tentacled eldritch that didn't want to rape women.🤔
Change the spelling to "ambience" & "scratch" to past tense.
They eat their victims alive!?🤢
So Omen is just a mole for the Cult of the Nemesis. How is Demi-Trix going to convince the others of this?
So this entire catastrophe was caused by the choices everyone made?
Who's he talking about?
Abadonna!? How the hell is she here, let alone why & now of all times!?😧
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7. They can, but working together makes it easier, drawing strength from their bond; it's a mental thing, since they often think of themselves as one person, although I try to show small differences in their behavior.(Foal-Bearer is the 'older', more strict on herself sister, Wet Nurse is warmer and better with people.)
15. Indeed!
16. I've tried to depict such entities as more alien/neutral in nature, such as in Beatrix's early stories, where she had to teach the Smooze about morality. (Despite being fairly amoral herself!)
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2. True, but a lot of demonic characters tend to be on the malicious side, even when their morally good.
3. Hehe… backfire~
6. Little did he know…
7. Both twins only have one wing on their shoulder, so in technical terms, they would need each other to fly properly. Also adds to their shared dynamic!
8./17. Nice catch!
10. She was created/born incomplete, hence the many… ‘flaws.’
11. Oh, she knows. And she quite literally gets off from making things worse for people. Varys, on the other hand, was a better case for this archetype.
12. Magitek is certainly possible. Just not in this timeline.
15. Not sure if it’s the exact same Nautilus, but we tend to reference/include a lot of well known fictional artifacts in this story. So quite likely!
18. Dying screams make for great seasoning, doncha know~?
19. I think it’s safe to say he’s a lot more than just a mole…
20. No, he’s referring to Demi-Trix already deciding he needs to be stopped. Why he’s going to great lengths to end reality is still unknown.
21./22. The unraveling universe has been pulling things and people out of their respective timeline. But Omen implies Abby was able to jump to this timeline herself, making where she came from all the more interesting…