(uses the rating) You deserve better, this is interesting!

And vorpal Blade, amusing, a friend's OC uses this as name

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I take it your friend is a fan of the Wonderland stories

But thank you!

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you're welcome and maybe, he never told me much about the background of said OC

(1) Well yeah, Varys has definitely become an even more powerful threat than before thanks to his newly acquired Demi-Human genes.
(2) I couldn't help but snicker at Shadow's description of Moxxi.
(3) Also I couldn't help but laugh as Zeloph groans about hearing their conversation about their assets
(4) PFFT!! Lol, the roasts against Midnight continue to accumulate! XD
(5) Hmm, I find their contrasting views over love, sex, and intimacy, interesting
(6) Again, interesting how the characters reacted to the charity + nuns event.
(7) Well, if you have the luck that Beatrix has, then everything sort of works out at the end. Though to be fair, not all the outcomes were desirable.
(8) Ah, Mortis's party is here to end the party.
(9) RIP all the observers. Yeah, Mortis's quest is very twisted. Violence just breeds more violence tho.
(10) While I'm glad that Quicksilver isn't completly soulless, it's sad that he's definitely under Mortis's control.
(11) Okay so basically the Master won't let them do anything until their main objective is complete? Huh. Well, it's kind of good because that means that as long as that objective isn't complete they can't, or at least shouldn't do anything (but then yet again Natural Selection did try to hunt down Oona so it's... hm). But well that also means that if everyone is defeated, well, RIP
(12) Well, it looks like Moxxi's comment about Nuns is now turned upon its head because their savior is a demi-human who belongs to that faction. And again, if Mortis simply allowed everyone to do as they wanted, well the story would've been over already... pretty much from the start? Huh.

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5. As much as I love open relationships, having a couple devoted to each other is a touching change of pace.
11. it’s heavily implied that Mortis will continue to kill even if he succeeds in killing Shadow Scythe. His underlings will never be free so long he remains active.
12. Felt like a nun based character was missing among our cast. A lot of interactions await ^^

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5. Well I like all the pairings
11. Oof, well I hope he does get stopped as soon as possible without having more observers die. Yeah, seeing Quicksilver in that state was sad.
12. Hmhmm, when the nuns first appeared with the charity I felt that there had to be a reason, and I was pleasantly surprised when our demi human was the Head Nun. Can't wait to see what will unfold!
But damn talk about great timing! I wonder how far in power have we gone to.

Yes! Somebody upvoted!

1. “Yeah! You definitely sell the sensitive bad boy rockstar,” the nekomata purred, her slit pupils tracing over his bare torso and abs. “Almost like someone I used to play with~!”

   Musically or literally?😦

2. “Maybe it needs a phrase? loike ‘by the will of Celestia’s ample butt cheeks, I am blessed wif cosmic radiance!’ or sum shite.”

   Really? Using Celestia's butt as a prayer?

3. “Bitch, please! Any thicker, and you’d need a forklift just to keep that thing from wobbling all over the place~!”

   More like she'll leave impact craters just by sitting down.

4. "I-I am not," assured Kitsune, who withdrew her hold and looked away. The cyber kunoichi strained to hide her loneliness and the need to find someone who understood her. She offered Shadow Scythe the black hood of her outfit for the final touch. "This should also help."

   Relationships 101: Whenever someone's lying about their inner feelings, they stutter.

5. Wispy returned her smile as the nekomata's striped twin tails looped around the demi's below. "Well..." She watched her sister trail away to investigate the area and keep watch. “She uses a special brand of shampoo that gives her tails the extra fluff factor. Has to go through bottles daily~!”

   Surely there's a way to do this more efficiently and economically?

6. “Oh, come off it,” the neon demon puffed. “I can’t fuckin' stand nuns and their ‘holier-than-thou’ charade. Only desperate girls take up the 'abit. I reckon half of them 're skanks!”

   That last reply of yours was still unnecessarily rude. The least you could have done was decline politely!😒

7. “Were you so merciful when slaughtering our kin?” asked the undead warlock. “Or how about the countless lives you stole to empower yourself? Was that an ^ of mercy?”

   The word "act" is missing here.

8. “Know that I do not take pleasure in all of this,” announced Mortis. “I merely wish to enact justice to the one evading it. And for that to be acquired, I must take what you love the most.”

   That is a fat lie! You're enjoying every second of this!😠

9. “It's okay, friend,” she assured the pale reaper. “Come with me, and we'll get you to safety."

   Now I want to know who this new Demi-human is.😯

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1. Yes~
2. I'm certain a religion would exist to worship Celestia's fine derriere
3. Can you tell I had a lot of fun coming up with this lewd nonsense? :p
4. It's hard to find love when most of your body is made of palpable liquid metal. Kitsune definitely got the short end of Varys' experiments.
5. Hey, when you're a pop sensation that makes likely 10k per concert, using shampoo bottles daily is second nature.
6. Unfortunately, polite is not in Ana's vocabulary.
7. Damnit.
8. Revenge is a dish best served cold, as the saying goes.
9. You will in the next chapter! She's one of the many new characters I'm excited to bring into our stories.