The beginning of the Bound By Blood Saga. This story focuses primarily from the perspective of Shadow Scythe as she, Zeloph, Moxxi and company venture to her home world to stop her enigmatic foe, Mortis. But he ain't the only thing to worry about.
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another interesting chapter
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Thank you!
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you're welcome
Very good chapter! So I guess the story will split now or soon? And oh dear, seems that them in Manor in trouble. Yeah, seems that Bellatrix's bet has turned into a full blown blunder.
I love the hot talk, and every moment just feels so great. I hope that they're able to let Moonlight fly again!
This story deserves more attention. Like truly. Best M Rated series I've read. A good mix of clop and story is what I like!
Wait, how does that work? Materials can't go extinct.😕
Did you mean "flushed"?
Maybe not, but the fact that you acknowledged your crimes entirely on your own is a good step forward on the road to redemption.🙂
Replace this full stop with a comma.
Getting some of that growth potion from Beatrix is still on her bucket list.🙃
Add "its way" here.
Hyphenate this phrase.
Replace with "?".
Ah, yes. The Snow Analogy: Cold & unwelcoming at first, but harmless as soon as you learn how to understand it.
Tradition, the source of about 50% of drama plots. Can't they all learn that it's just like rules? It's made to be broken!
Add "it's" here. At least Omen does it for good reasons.
Now Oona has 2 babies to deal with.🙄
Add "!" here.
I'm surprised that he was the only one to grow suspicious.😕
You pick now of all times to think of killing her!?😤
I hope they all find a way out of this mess. What can Omen do that won't result in them killing Abby!?
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1. Not extinct. Just no longer available in her world, most likely.
2./4./6./7./8.13. once again, thank you for the grammar suggestion. Though can I ask that you DM me them next time? Sorta feels like your more focused on them then you are the actual story content
3. Indeed! Just need to not be so self destructive with criticism.
5. Nonsense, she’s perfect the way she is!
9. Classic Tsundere
10. The past is very relevant to Haden once we finally do meet him.
11. Not always.
12. Plenty of milk to go around given the size of Oona’s bosom :P
14. He likely already knew something bad was going to happen. He’s a prophet, after all.
15. No, she heavily considered killing Alma. But her ego and feelings got in the way.
16. I mean, he’s a carnivorous deer. They’re not too different in a way.
17. Yeah, when Beatrix and the others find out, there will be hell to pay. But I don’t think what Bellatrix did warrants too harsh a lashing. This would be the third time a heroic character fell for a baddie
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Well, personally, it saves time for me if I don't DM you the corrections separately. I'm not doing this to be condescending, I just want to help you and others as to where grammar correction is due.😊And no, I don't focus more on grammar errors, if that's what you're worried about. There are just times where I don't have much to say about the plot, that's all.
As if we didn't have enough Greek Tragedies in life.😒
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Gotchya! 👌
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Sorry, I mistyped my last reply. I meant to say it takes less time if I post everything in the comments & not DM you the corrections.