Raven finds himself in a world with talking ponies, bug pony queens who wants a piece of him, a sea horse who wants tacos, and singing... There could have been worse places to end up at.
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Hey, glad you are back. Can't wait to see how Raven's children will react to seeing them.
Ok gman1311, thanks for the new chapter. And to see this rolling again.
Also, {I know this might get me blocked} I recommend PMing me so we can discuss how Raven handles the situation in the next chapter. Just trying to be productive cause I’m bored and need to do ‘something’.
Thanks a lot for the chapter. I'm waiting for the continuation.
"I could come up with a joke for the chapter, but I'm too lazy"
Can't wait for next chapter ☺️
Really, this should resinate with the royals there, as well as the guards. Most of what he said during this chapter is exactly how both rulers and military have to think. Shining Hiney will definitely see an old war veteran in Raven. Shining, being a lifer in the military, he spent a ton of time around upper brass. Many of whom would have been veterans of combat. There is a patina or a darkening in old soldiers. It comes with the job. All in all, he couldn't have made a better first impression.
As far as the civilians..Who knows.
Monk
“There are many ways to create a monster, and the one the girl knows best is rather basic: you tell someone they're a monster over and over again, then wait to see how long it takes before they agree with you.” -Estee
Raven Ambrosia I need a ride .ambrosia name the place and time. Raven not that type of ride well maybe later
It's a good thing that Pinkie exercised self control. This really wasn't the time, but she can still create Raven's favorite dessert.
Raven's past experience helps him understand what's needed of a leader. I'm sure Twilight can take notes for the future.
Now time for the awkward but equally important dining.
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I love pinkie pie, but some fimfic writers take it a bit far with her personality. And unlike other foes she's messed around with, this one has actually killed. No words need to be said about it; some of them can already tell.
I think I'm beginning to like Maya.
won
Other than that, I loved this chapter and glad to see that you’re back. I took a break from MLP myself but I do come back from time to time in order to read all the lovely works by people like you.
I think you did Pinkie Pie great, even somepony like her would be a bit hesitant from getting near Raven. As for Luna, I don’t think you slandered her at all. Raven’s comments and sympathy was in character and realistic. Many people can agree that her reaction to never being appreciated was over reacting. But at the same time, I feel many have had thoughts of just saying “F**k everyone!” and wish death upon the world as well. We may not act on those thoughts, but we’ve all had them at one point in life.
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Thanks!
I like to take time off the website once in a while and check out other fandoms for fanfics. And let me tell you the quality is varied. I think I dislike Wattpad the most because lots of writing bad habits form over there, and people just like copying each other. It’s so bad there it makes the Displaced fimfics look like Shakespeare.
Other sites were slightly better but it made me miss Fimfics. But I’m really self conscious now when reading other fimfics because I go like “dang this guy’s version of applejack is slightly better than mines”
All and all it’s good to be back
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Oh thank god. But yeah I love Luna and I think her design is cool as well (love my edgy stuff), but I see way too many people write Luna as “woeist me,” or sometimes “Luna did nothing wrong, it was Celestia’s fault”. Like I’ve said before Celestia could of handled it better, but Luna was in the wrong for this. Luna is pretty lucky in getting a second chance, a lesser person would of out right killed her.
I like to think that behind the cheery facade Pinkie Pie puts up, that there's someone with a keen intellect. How would reality bending powers help you if your enemy could just push a 'I win' button any time they want and take out not only her but all her friends too. I think she's perfectly in character myself.derpicdn.net/img/view/2013/2/16/245878.gif
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Yeah, some might say this character is overpowered, but I was kind of tired reading stories where a Humans comes into Equestria and is weak (it’s a fanfic make something up)
Or another trope I hate is
Human: “ hello, do you know where I am?”
Mane 6: *ATTACK*
OR
Human: “ hello, do you know where I am?”
Rainbow Dash: *ATTACK*
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Do you have any particular fanfic websites you’d recommend checking out? I’ve been on both fanfiction.net and been looking through wattpad like crazy. I do agree that many writers on wattpad just seem to write the exact same thing with barely any differences. I’ve found some diamonds in the cole mine though.
I’m not really a fan of fanfiction.net search engine and comments, sure you can limit the series and if you want crossovers or not, but the tags and genre system is so confusing for me. Also, I had an aneurysm trying to create my account on that site. For some reason it didn’t accept my email, but I had already registered the name KarasAdamas, so when I connected with my facebook instead, I had to go around as KarasAdamas1 for months. Until I accidentally logged out, forgot my password, and tried my email again. AND SUDDENLY IT WORKED! But then I had to go on a memory journey trying to find all the fanfics I saved from those months as KarasAdamas1.
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I recommend https://archiveofourown.org/ the quality control is better on there, but please read the tags! Reading the tags is important because some people post the most degenerate shit on there.
I’ve found some diamonds on Wattpad, but the amount of garbage I have to go through isn’t even funny, and it usually consist of:
Betrayed
Harems
Marysues
Bad grammar
Gamer/system
Harems!
Polyamory or whatever they call it
Also did I mention Harems?!
Okay, let me say this, I enjoy a good harem once in a while. For gods sake this is technically a harem story (the queens just want his seed and that’s about it)
I feel like you need to flesh it out, or just make the world grim dark or something. Or just make it funny.
Besides that pm some of those good Wattpad stories
As for fanfiction.net it took me a while to get used to. That place is weird because a lot of there content can be found all the way back to 2004. If you do use it again try staying above 2010.
I know more fanfic site but it’s like 80% isekai/gamer/system/harem fics. Found only story there I liked but stopped half way through because it went from a nier automata setting to the rwby setting. The mc literally world hoped, and three chapters in he does with the two twins from yangs trailer. Yeah.
So uhh. Calliphora? She and her hive get you by shapeshifting into your deceased loved one. Despite the fact they shouldn’t know who that is.
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Who shouldn’t know them? Need to be more clear about this?
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It's been stated at least to my knowledge, that Calliphora and the Necropolis hive can take the form of someone who's dead. And it's unknown how they know what the dead pony looked like.
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Oh yes I remember that! That will be included as well.