Raven finds himself in a world with talking ponies, bug pony queens who wants a piece of him, a sea horse who wants tacos, and singing... There could have been worse places to end up at.
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Fillers are good for giving information to those that aren't familiar with whatever series there's a crossover with. However, I feel that as a filler chapter, even if Raven was injured here, you could have done a bit better in describing the characters he brought up to the Outcasts.
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I'm sorry about that,
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also thanks for catching that mistake for me, freaking auto-correct sometimes. But yeah, next storytime, I'll have him go in-depth more.
If you do fight Luna again. Might I recommend making a weapon that shoots like a shotgun? I just wanted to add input to help your guy here win.
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I already have something in mind, and no it's not one of rose's guns. I don't consider her canon. Also, out of all the DFO characters, they chose her.
This is an interesting story an I canβt wait to see more! Keep up the awesome work!
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Thank you! More is coming! Should have something up by tomorrow, hopefully.
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Awesome to hear!
Raven is soft to the kids, he can't deny this. :)
Considering that he's not at 100%, I wonder what it will be to see him fight at full potential.
Or what he will do to lead a group of monsters/sirens/changelings. He did say he wanted to help his current charges, but will he extend that to the rest?
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You'll know soon enough.
Good chapter ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»
Update ??????
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tomorrow the 16th, or the 17th. like I said posted on my page, only 1 update this week. mostly so I can catch up with school and sleep, and gaming
Ok ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»
And good luck for school
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thank you