Raven finds himself in a world with talking ponies, bug pony queens who wants a piece of him, a sea horse who wants tacos, and singing... There could have been worse places to end up at.
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Pretty picture of art I hope he does one of the queen. I will happen if the queen into a female human
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I was about to say “What if she transforms into a human shape?” Not fully human, but human shaped.
All of this is in bold, pretty sure that wasn’t intentional.
Except for this mistake, I couldn’t find any other errors. Though it’s always possible that I missed something, but still Good job!
Also,
Siansaar, the artist and owner of the changeling queens, did create concept art for the daughters of the queens. Ambrosia’s daughter is named Photuris. Though Siansaar has made other queens who’s relations are unknown. Queen Patina looks like she could be Ambrosia’s other daughter and she share some similarities with Raven, one thing being very similar.
A changelings got to feed somehow. And it's nice of Raven to let out some of his insecurities to somebody else.
First off, great artwork. Really love how it was done. But just so you know, I don’t mind the NSFW stuff. Plus, if I were Raven right now, I feel the same way. We have standards but he’s still a male, and males need to let loose every now and then. Otherwise, they get violent, and we really don’t want that. Besides, Raven might need this. To not only get more changelings on the way, but to satisfy his frustrations so he thinks more effectively in battle with also governing his new growing community.
That reminds me. Have you thought about a name for your new town or village? If so, PLEASE don’t name it after the raven or crow. You know, for the sake of your readers. Otherwise, it would become predictably. Just saying.🇺🇸
This sentence is a bit confusing, not sure if it’s intentional. At first I thought you misspelled that Maud told Raven something, but then I read it as more of a future statement of Maud telling her sister. It’s a little unclear.
God, If I were there I would be like, "Dude, fuck her already. For christ sake, just get it over with. Its not like she is asking for your freaking soul. Hell guys fuck ugly chicks in the bar bathrooms all the freaking time. At least this one isn't ugly.
Bite the dam bullet.
Monk
"I understand killin’ but I sure as hell don't understand you sheltered bastards.” -ThePhoton