Raven finds himself in a world with talking ponies, bug pony queens who wants a piece of him, a sea horse who wants tacos, and singing... There could have been worse places to end up at.
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Yes Sonata it's wrong 2 + 2 isn't 5 the answer it's 22. I like that picture from the way her face looks to me it is saying come on just going to give me one kiss
Good work. And you’re right, money is important now. And what Raven has here is what will boost New Elisa’s economy.
I think you meant foal name and her stage name is spelled as DJ Pon-3
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“We could crash the gem market by flooding it with magic stones!”
Also, I’ve noticed that you seem to have trouble with adding spaces or not to the quotation marks (these “ ”). I would recommend that you read through your chapters and specifically look for where there are unnecessary spaces or where there are missing spaces to these. It can make a sentence confusing, like this one:
It makes it look like someone new is talking or a start of a new sentence while the previous wasn’t, or it makes it hard to understand what is being said out loud and what is being an inner monologued.
Other than that, great chapter and nice to see Raven both bonding and teaching his little ponies. Siansaar did an amazing work with the art.
Also, I’m pretty sure I mentioned this in another comment on a previous chapter but I am curious on what you think. Are the Equestrians aware that there are more than one changeling hive? Logically, it feels like they wouldn’t know since no one knew what a changeling was before the wedding invasion. I imagine it will be quite the shock for the Main 6, Shining Armor and Cadence when they meet Ambrosia and possibly Myxine. Depending on if she gets there before them.
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As always, thank you for the help!
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Sssh, don't worry, it's coming!
Will there be a chapter about the researches into Health, Education, Stability, Agriculture, Military and Basic Resource?
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Yes. As for when? I'm not sure
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That picture looks like someone took her cake