Raven finds himself in a world with talking ponies, bug pony queens who wants a piece of him, a sea horse who wants tacos, and singing... There could have been worse places to end up at.
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could be interesting; just remember to pay attention to spelling and complete sentences so the reader doesn't get distracted.
thats all i have to say really. good luck.
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Thanks Man, I’ll do my best.
You know, it's weird, a lot of authors I know of would try their damnedest to spread all the information in this singular paragraph across half the chapter.
I applaud you Gman, for being reasonable.
Oooookay, now you lost me.
But, y'know, in the entertaining 'I wanna figure out what this is about' way.
I was thinking of making a Matrix reference, but that would have been too easy.
Did it just... switch perspectives?
His what?
THE LOVE OF HIS WHAT, GODDAMMIT?!
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Ah, a pure, realistic reaction.
In all honesty, this story is okay. Could do with some minor editing, but other than that, it's pretty decent.
7/10
Will continue later
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Thank you for my story, even if it's just the prologue. but I need to come back and fix some of this. But I hope you enjoy the rest of it.
I'm sorry but I have to be the one to do this.
IS THAT JOJO REFERENCE!
This got me hooked in an instant.
idk
I liked the old one better, but the picture is definitely a nice touch for what they look like.
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Welp
unamused and forehead
a sign to those that wish for things to be better and that is will get better or something, wasn’t sure how to fix this one.
“It’s working everypony!”
The whole what?
some
I think this was indeed a better version, even though I don’t remember exactly how it looked before. Good job!
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as always thank you for the help and I'm glad you liked it more.
'Man' is not needed. 👍
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Ummmmmmm what's going on?
Must be from the fighting game.
Ahhh~, that'll never get old..
Anyway, yeah, you changed it.
7/10
Like I said before, I'll continue it later
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Thank you for the comment!