Raven finds himself in a world with talking ponies, bug pony queens who wants a piece of him, a sea horse who wants tacos, and singing... There could have been worse places to end up at.
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How is your government going to be royalty Style democracy Style dictator Style choose or would you like a random roll. Why does she get to be naked because her genitalia isn't just hanging out there unlike you ponies put some clothes on
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benevolent dictator is what I’m going with right now, but don’t get it twisted, as the saying goes ‘No man rules alone.’
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This part isn’t colored. And lol, even when dying Add’s still an asshole. One of the reasons he’s my favorite.
The only ones who didn’t seem upset were Photo Finish and the undead ponies.
So Raven’s got an army of Nasods now, good. Once he’s made the agreements with Ambrosia, it might be a good idéa to discuss whether or not he should contact the other Queens, except Chrysalis of course. Considering the one shot, Myxine is probably the best. She seems serious, has the smallest hive and she would be desperate for the protection he could bring to her changelings. Maybe she’ll arrive at the border of the valley? Two Queens are better than one.
This also seems like a good spot for a timeskip, not a long but short, and to see a perspective on how the other kingdoms are reacting to Raven and the Dream Valley’s appearance. Would be fun to see one of the ponies or griffons reporting sighting of the monster ponies and Nasods wandering in the valley.
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as always thank you! And I wouldn't call a bunch of generation 1 nasods an army. He doesn't have any generation nasods, and Maya still needs her repairs and slight modifications.
stop reading my mind!
Also yeah, she'll be the first one to come, but it's for a different reason.
As for a time skip, it'll only be a week at most, unless I won't more wiggle room.
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I feel that this meme is fitting considering the german parts of Elsword.
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Even when dead, Eve is still fucking Raven over with her havoc with the reactor
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Yup, and it’s going be a big issue down the line.
First off, you don’t have to point of the clotheless problem like that. If you do, I recommend cloaks, robes, and loincloths as of newfound government law.
Second, I really need to talk to you on this matter in PM. I want to discuss your creation with this system building for Raven, trust me. But first, if you do PM me, I have a question for you. And I’m being serious about, cause what we discuss in PM, that will be your dissension in the end.
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Made a point of this earlier in the story about the clothes. Also later on a plot reason of making some of them wear clothes.