Raven finds himself in a world with talking ponies, bug pony queens who wants a piece of him, a sea horse who wants tacos, and singing... There could have been worse places to end up at.
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I wonder when his children are going to start calling Ambrosia mom. You can ride me anytime perfect absolutely hilarious.
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Won’t be anytime soon.
Thanks for the chapter 😊
I think this is the first fanfic were I’ve enjoyed every single chapter. Not one bad chapter, the way you think through everything and how everything is falling in place is impressive and an incredible achievement in writing. So happy that this fanfic continues to go strong. And the artwork, Sweet Mother of All Things!
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Thank you! I always do my best when it comes to every chapter even the filler and April fools stuff. I learned from the best like Hollow in Equestria and Prey and a lamb. Also I’ve taken the best parts of a human in Equestria, cut more the generic stuff like the Human ending up in the everfree forest.
Another thing when I write stuff.
1) No time travel.
2) Nothing complicated.
3) no melodrama. (Only when ideals are clashing)
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Posted the last comment a little early.
4) No character bashing.
Character bashing is a bit of problem when people write fics. I understand people’s frustration with Princess Celestia, believe me I have my problems how she does things and how the show runner portrayed her. Just give the mare a bit of a spanking and move on.
5) Pacing
There’s reason why I haven’t do anything with the vamponies and talked about the storm kingdom just yet. I want to resolve the conflicts in the fore front.
6) derailing the canon timeline.
I’ve seen too many writers follow the show to the letter. If you’re going to follow the episodic nature of the show. Change them and make it interesting!! My Twilight facade does an amazing job at this! A human pisses off a wizard and is sent into a different dimension and posses twilights body. It’s some good shit! (Mf doesn’t take shit from no one and calls out mother fuckers)
So yeah, I’ve gotten a lot of impression from other fics.
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Ok, yes. We need to get Trixie and her gunpower right away!
Also, interesting chapter. It makes my day better after watching the new Mario film. {Which by the way is a work of art}
11551185 I need to watch it! Buts it’s been a while since I’ve been in a movie theater .