Raven finds himself in a world with talking ponies, bug pony queens who wants a piece of him, a sea horse who wants tacos, and singing... There could have been worse places to end up at.
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its been 3 chapters and your still leaving words out of sentences. kinda pisses me off tbh, but the chapters are short and its only 1 or 2 so its easy to get over.
i like the chaos building up.
I’m sorry about that, I’ll see what I can do about that.
Really happy right now! I got featured again! Thank you again all of you!
This is a good story so far.
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Thank you, and thank you for the favorite!
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Your welcome
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In all seriousness it would be a pretty boring story if they were all pushovers. Okay maybe expect Cadence.
I like this. Certain characters showing up out of the woodwork, Twilight turning into a creature of darkness, and most satisfying of all. Celestia’s plan to turn her student into an alicorn so she can take the throne in the future has been cut off completely.😈
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I won't lie; I love reading fics where Celestia's plans are ruined. i.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/original/001/515/573/a95.jpg
I still love her, though; I just wished she had backup plans or something instead of the "I knew you could do it." crap. Seriously who sends Six mares up a mountain to get rid of a dragon. I know peace, love, and friendship, but damn.
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I like how the dragon thing is the one that bothers people the most and I agree, but let's not forget everything else that Celestia sent the Main 6 to do. And I agree with you, I still love Celestia but I wish that she would have a back up, but then again things usually got sorted so we don't really know if she had a back up or not.
Well, ain't this just a picnic, now we just need Tirek and Sombra(somehow)
It was going good but then you started just adding plot point after plot point kinda bloating the whole thing this soon can only spell disaster for the balancing of them to not create constant plot holes as well would be difficult with so many moving parts.
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Sorry about that.