Just because I can, and because I am going to review this later... YOINK! First post!
First of all, I am not awesome, it is you that is awesome for making this story, chapter after chapter, only getting better and better... Well I can´t say anything yet for this one, it is 1AM right now and I would wish that I was clear enough in my head to read it now, but it must wait to after some sleep so I also can write a few words about the chapter.
Oh and if I really have your eternal thanks and want to repay some of it... Well I would love if the names that you have written for both me and Rattlesire was links to our users, that would be "repayment" enough for me so you don´t have to thinking over thanking me. Although Rattlesire is super awesome is he an person that could use just a little more spotlight.
So that was all for now. Can´t wait to read this chapter!
Great chapter, I liked it. I was a little disorientated at first about whose view it was in, but quickly remembered the events in the last chapter after a few lines and realised it was Felix. As for the contents, I like the whole Felix x Tinker thing. It feels natural because he's just being the nice guy he is and she's growing closer to him thanks to the support and generally being held in such a way.
I also like how Felix stood up for himself and stopped giving in to Shayle's demands. She really, really needs to stop being so protective and realise that she's holding on too tightly. (Though it's written perfectly in that sense. She doesn't want to lose all she has left.)
Charmers injury plays out just how I wanted it to, even if I don't want her to be in pain and such it just makes sense and is well handled. I hope it makes for some really biased dialogue later on with strangers who aren't so accepting of her damage.
I thought you might like that ending Kipper, especially after the last chapter when you brought them up. It can't even remotely compare to Crimson and Cherry's relationship, but hopefully it'll be at least decent.
And yes, Felix will be doing that more since he's finally sick of being treated like a foal. It may have been slightly motivated by Seer's little speech to him the first night they separated, but just know it will start growing too and Shayle will not be happy about it at all.
As for Charmer. Yes, there will be at least a point where they run into a situation where her appearance will put them in a bit of a tough spot and their only help will be less inclined to do so because she looks...yeah.
But yeah, thanks again for reading guys, and I'm glad you enjoyed it
Shame on you chapter! You should not end with two cliffhangers like that! One is hard enough to live with.
It must have been some wasteland luck that the cover was done to this chapter, now that we are thinking back on the dad, none the less it is still awesome, and I does still mean that you deserve it.
Not going to say so much more, it was in the same good quality so nothing really from my side to point out again
For writing a stable that was rather Sandy, for using more than one point of view to tell your story, and for having written one of the best zebra stories that I know does I hereby on this day grant you my stamp of approval
I was listening to Radiohead's album "The Bends" while reading this and burst into tears halfway through. I made my self a sandwich then continued to read with tears in my eyes. This chapter brang up memories of beloved family members who I have lost. What made me cry is the fact their deaths mean nothing to me... Damnit the feelz were strong in this chapter... Thank you for your existence ^_^
Just because I can, and because I am going to review this later... YOINK! First post!
First of all, I am not awesome, it is you that is awesome for making this story, chapter after chapter, only getting better and better... Well I can´t say anything yet for this one, it is 1AM right now and I would wish that I was clear enough in my head to read it now, but it must wait to after some sleep so I also can write a few words about the chapter.
Oh and if I really have your eternal thanks and want to repay some of it... Well I would love if the names that you have written for both me and Rattlesire was links to our users, that would be "repayment" enough for me so you don´t have to thinking over thanking me. Although Rattlesire is super awesome is he an person that could use just a little more spotlight.
So that was all for now. Can´t wait to read this chapter!
Haha! Beat that, Fate! I have found this story again!
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Remember to favorite it then, that way have it a whole lot harder time with slipping trough your fingers
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Already done. I did that the moment I found it again.
So an little, 23 views to late, congratulation with the 1000th view comment
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WOO! Thanks, this is so exciting!
Great chapter, I liked it. I was a little disorientated at first about whose view it was in, but quickly remembered the events in the last chapter after a few lines and realised it was Felix.
As for the contents, I like the whole Felix x Tinker thing. It feels natural because he's just being the nice guy he is and she's growing closer to him thanks to the support and generally being held in such a way.
I also like how Felix stood up for himself and stopped giving in to Shayle's demands. She really, really needs to stop being so protective and realise that she's holding on too tightly. (Though it's written perfectly in that sense. She doesn't want to lose all she has left.)
Charmers injury plays out just how I wanted it to, even if I don't want her to be in pain and such it just makes sense and is well handled. I hope it makes for some really biased dialogue later on with strangers who aren't so accepting of her damage.
Yeah, great chapter. Keep it up.
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Thanks!
I thought you might like that ending Kipper, especially after the last chapter when you brought them up. It can't even remotely compare to Crimson and Cherry's relationship, but hopefully it'll be at least decent.
And yes, Felix will be doing that more since he's finally sick of being treated like a foal. It may have been slightly motivated by Seer's little speech to him the first night they separated, but just know it will start growing too and Shayle will not be happy about it at all.
As for Charmer.
Yes, there will be at least a point where they run into a situation where her appearance will put them in a bit of a tough spot and their only help will be less inclined to do so because she looks...yeah.
But yeah, thanks again for reading guys, and I'm glad you enjoyed it
Shame on you chapter! You should not end with two cliffhangers like that! One is hard enough to live with.
It must have been some wasteland luck that the cover was done to this chapter, now that we are thinking back on the dad, none the less it is still awesome, and I does still mean that you deserve it.
Not going to say so much more, it was in the same good quality so nothing really from my side to point out again
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I'm glad you liked the chapter Thanks a bunch, and yes, the cover was very appropriate to come out with this chapter.
For writing a stable that was rather Sandy, for using more than one point of view to tell your story, and for having written one of the best zebra stories that I know does I hereby on this day grant you my stamp of approval
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WOO! Thanks!
I'd like to thank the Academy, my parents, and of course Princess Luna for making this possible
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... Why does I fell that there is missing a Kkat in that speech =P
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Ah yes, her too. And Somber, as is tradition in my author's notes
Good news yet again. Congratulations on getting a feature in the Fallout Equestria group
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Wow, thanks!
I was listening to Radiohead's album "The Bends" while reading this and burst into tears halfway through. I made my self a sandwich then continued to read with tears in my eyes. This chapter brang up memories of beloved family members who I have lost. What made me cry is the fact their deaths mean nothing to me...
Damnit the feelz were strong in this chapter...
Thank you for your existence ^_^