Ahhhh it’s finally here!!! So.much.hype! The beginning is incredible already and is setting up for a great story. The descriptions and characterizations are phenomenal and if you asked me to pick my favorite part so far I would just be wildly flailing at the entire thing XD. Can’t wait for the rest, great work you guys
I have a feeling that all the other princesses left her to her own devices. And then twilights friends started dying to natural causes so she turned to dark magic to keep them alive but when time overode even the dark magic artificially extending there lives twilight snaped and went insane
Okay... now that's some weird mojo coming from these dreams. And this falling thing where Sunny is nevertheless giggling all the way... is someone, something trying a takeover ?
From what I've seen, it could be a princess from ages past, come mad from power... and that put this whole Summer Sun Celebration in quite a bad light (eh) indeed.
Things will go bad. It's all but spelled. I can't wait to see how exactly
Oh boy, oh boy, oh boy, it's finally arrived. A horror story from the combined minds of two infamous authors; one responsible for a dark little factory, the other for a bright big apocalypse.
This is going to be one for the ages. Buckle up, everyone.
So… Twilight didn’t have too good a time after the show. Unless you count becoming a beastial cannibalistic creature that might have severed ponies connection with magic or of been defeated only be ponies being severed from magic.
My best guess is that somewhere in her subconscious, Sunny realizes that she has damned Equestria through her actions, and she laughs at the absurdity of the horrible truth.
Loving this story mate, can't wait to read more.
Also, when will we hear the winners of the Rainbow Factory competition?
"I've got a bad feeling about this... " - Luke Skywalker
This story already has me hooked beyond belief. That last line for this chapter, oh that last line... This is gonna be an adventure of a lifetime isn't it? We're witnessing history here folks, just like the Rainbow Factory all those years ago...
Was I screaming again?” Sunny asked, trying to crawl out of the cot without making more of a mess.
Izzy froze, her face locked in a grimace. “No,” she said slowly, looking her friend over. “No, Sunny. You were flailing, and your eyes were open, you looked terrified, like you were fighting something off, but you…”
Not a bad concept for a story. I think it needs a slower pace though. It doesn't feel like there's enough build up for the horror or time to digest it.
“I found some information on a festival celebrated annually in Ancient Equestria when I was last in Bridlewood. It’s called the “Summer Sun Celebration”, and it’s celebrated on the morning of the summer solstice. Ponies from all over the land would gather for it.” “Ponies came from everywhere to watch the sun rise?” Hitch asked, scratching his head. “What, were they concerned it wouldn’t come up or something?”
Well, for a time that was a valid concern:
“Was I screaming again?” Sunny asked, trying to crawl out of the cot without making more of a mess. Izzy froze, her face locked in a grimace. “No,” she said slowly, looking her friend over. “No, Sunny. You were flailing, and your eyes were open, you looked terrified, like you were fighting something off, but you…” “What?” “You were giggling.”
That may actually make things scarier. Because it may mean whatever (or whoever) is inside Sunny is breaking free.
Super excited that this is finally out!
Have some alternate cover art too!
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An AuroraDawn story hot off the presses! I can't wait to see how Sunny overcomes adversity and absolutely nothing bad happens to her.
...
Today is not gonna be her day, is it?
That's not the real Twilight.
Just one of those stupid nightmares.
Ahhhh it’s finally here!!! So.much.hype! The beginning is incredible already and is setting up for a great story. The descriptions and characterizations are phenomenal and if you asked me to pick my favorite part so far I would just be wildly flailing at the entire thing XD. Can’t wait for the rest, great work you guys
I have a feeling that all the other princesses left her to her own devices.
And then twilights friends started dying to natural causes so she turned to dark magic to keep them alive but when time overode even the dark magic artificially extending there lives twilight snaped and went insane
Oh Sunny, you had no idea. Did you dear?
Okay... now that's some weird mojo coming from these dreams. And this falling thing where Sunny is nevertheless giggling all the way... is someone, something trying a takeover ?
From what I've seen, it could be a princess from ages past, come mad from power... and that put this whole Summer Sun Celebration in quite a bad light (eh) indeed.
Things will go bad. It's all but spelled.
I can't wait to see how exactly
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You never know how far you may be willing to go for people/ponies you care for. I think it is twilight but she’s nightmare harmony.
Oh boy, oh boy, oh boy, it's finally arrived. A horror story from the combined minds of two infamous authors; one responsible for a dark little factory, the other for a bright big apocalypse.
This is going to be one for the ages. Buckle up, everyone.
AWESOME. THIS IS GOING TO HURT, ISN'T IT?
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Well, shit!
So… Twilight didn’t have too good a time after the show.
Unless you count becoming a beastial cannibalistic creature that might have severed ponies connection with magic or of been defeated only be ponies being severed from magic.
My best guess is that somewhere in her subconscious, Sunny realizes that she has damned Equestria through her actions, and she laughs at the absurdity of the horrible truth.
Loving this story mate, can't wait to read more.
Also, when will we hear the winners of the Rainbow Factory competition?
"I've got a bad feeling about this... " - Luke Skywalker
This story already has me hooked beyond belief. That last line for this chapter, oh that last line... This is gonna be an adventure of a lifetime isn't it? We're witnessing history here folks, just like the Rainbow Factory all those years ago...
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In the next few days! By Halloween at the latest.
That last line...
duuuuuude.....
I pictured Sunny on Joker Gas and.....it terrified me.
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Jesus Christ, this is not gonna go well is it?
The story is literal Fire though.
I can already tell that this story is going to be solid gold.
now that's how you open a story!
Dear God, the option to "Giggle at the Ghosties" is officially off the table!
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Very far back in sunny's biological processes something understood what was said and made her start giggling
Not a bad concept for a story. I think it needs a slower pace though. It doesn't feel like there's enough build up for the horror or time to digest it.
Getting mad silent ponyville vibes from this one boys
Well, for a time that was a valid concern:
That may actually make things scarier.
Because it may mean whatever (or whoever) is inside Sunny is breaking free.